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Bullets fly threw the sky looking for life ] Cutting through light with the focus of making night Once they find their right they leave nothing but the end of life Words fly through the light looking for someone to end their flight And once they find there intention it gives them a purpose To influences our view Whether they are right or wrong they have changed our song This has doubted our right to live our life We were given the right to let our own words have the light So we can empower our own rights and sing our own song

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Date: 7/8/2011 7:14:00 AM
Whether they are right or wrong they have changed our song... this line really captivated me, how you showed us that other's opinion do matter, very interesting... GREAT job here!!!
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Date: 6/19/2011 7:39:00 AM
Very thought provoking expressions on the words and its effects, Hemi
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Hemi Lewis
Date: 6/19/2011 6:55:00 PM
Thank you for your words as they help me to sing my song thank you

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