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Subtle humor is the game, words can drive you quite insane, till the master calls a halt n says repent, a little sad but wiser, never mind Elisa, so he tiptoes back to his own little tent:) Don Johnson

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Date: 6/19/2011 5:33:00 AM
Is this about being cut off from the soup? My wife takes my "bowl" away many a night! So that I too may return to my little tent!" ---Now watch this be an interpretation that is WAAAY off what you were saying! LoL. Nice words!
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Date: 6/14/2011 8:37:00 AM
LOL Very witty, Don, and I love the way the "Master" intervenes. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/14/2011 4:16:00 PM
Carolyn, Poets life is very strange, jerked out of bed 4 a verse with mange, but my master intervenes:)
Date: 6/14/2011 7:23:00 AM
It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Don. Please keep sharing your writing with us. I wish you much inspiration that you may continue with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/14/2011 4:11:00 PM
Thank you Sweet Carol Brown..:)
Date: 6/14/2011 4:45:00 AM
heh heh ... a cute write with a repenting poetic plight, Don...
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Date: 6/14/2011 4:13:00 PM
Have to keep the flame alight, snakes might arrive tonight, thanks Robert...
Date: 6/14/2011 1:04:00 AM
nice,,, very nice ;}
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Date: 6/14/2011 4:09:00 PM
Thank you Debbie, comments are hard to catch up with :)
Date: 6/13/2011 7:20:00 PM
I like this one
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