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I'm tired of trying to fit in because i keeping adding but one and one don't add up so i take the three and my doubt enter a letter and make it alright and when i feel blue i'll make it all black because i can't go back to where i belong it's been so long i hope you are still strong i thought i could hold out this winters long but the summer seems to be draging on out it's not the sum of every man i worried about just the day that we all may have to move out leather and hardbacks all give me their doubts and everywhere i look sell me out of my ways sayin i am a wicked man for understanding but i don't understand the way of Babylon and all the proverbs and shurahs call but they re just caved up words lost to there own faulty ways that makes a man to sin in ways we dont belong

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/12/2011 1:11:00 PM
Danny,, wow! very clever and deep... ways we don't... thanks ,...p.d.
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Date: 6/11/2011 6:02:00 PM
a super powerful write Danny ..depth and drama all the way through luv.. the intro lines make it your own.. your individuality and creativity shines in this piece luv..
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