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Never before World ignored An honest reward Thats been solidly deserved Have you read this book before? Im the ingnorent source I feel lost and sore As if my feeling have been outsourced Between the here and the never more My defiant mind Leaves lines hard to find With in this twisted plot Lost inside a much deeper thought War that must be fought Though I fear at the end We will find only rot Incomplete sentence but all the intensity one can handle, doctors orders take one at a time water may help to swallow this rhyme goes like a lame venom soggy smooth leaving you with frostbit lining rust crusted, flame touched, hard felt, torched tipped adrenalin rush. I have a felt tipped sole and I feel as though somethings wrenching my intenstin, caroding my dreams lost new findings of my famous failure seems my words fall into a category to be defined as caroded comprehension built and thrived on empty ambitions though force fed lines taught by the sole read by the mind brought to these hands so you might find some type of understanding, under lining this torture of mine. left to the basics how would you fill in the blanks? could you redefine this rhyme? my mind boggles, and rips and tares, to find a tear to cry wouldn't it be easier if i'd just talk She says she can't understand it's as though there's too many words just floating I don't speak in word I speak in verse so I feel Im left drowing in my floating words. praying hoping someone finds relief in me I write on words

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Date: 12/31/2010 6:37:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Dave. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also. Wishing you a Happy New Year. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/30/2010 7:53:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed your creative write tonight.. have fun on the soup site with luv..
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Date: 12/30/2010 6:59:00 PM
Dave..,, enjoyed your poem. Stopping by to wish you lots of cheers & joy this comming new year.. May you always find new ways to share your talent and imagination with us here at the soup. Happy new year to you and your family,, God bless,.miss.p.d.
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