Words

words, they say so much
but the true meaning is always lost
words, aren't thou sick of guessing
never even attempted to understand my blessing
i will never be able to talk to you
to tell you, oh how a dream come true
to say goodbye and let this friendship die
it would be a lie to tell you i wooldn't miss you
wwe talked, clivked just like that
fun, mostly annoying, moments never to be brought back
in memory of memories 
your's will be held dearest
for you believed in me
when i couldn't see
the light at the end of a tunnel
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 7, 2010 at 11:41 AM
Hi Jessica. Thanks for your wonderful comment on my poem and welcome to Soup. Your poem on the impact of words is great. I love the use of flow and creativity to keep the reader wanting more. If I had one suggestion, I believe your keyboard got stuck, there are errors in lines 9 and 10. My keyboard gets stuck on "u" and it drives me nuts. Good luck in your writing, I look forward to reading more.
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June 2, 2010 at 11:31 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jessica. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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