Words

Writings my love, and so are you. I need both, yet most of all you. My emotions, I . . . can keep hid. Since I’ve known you, that’s all I did. Now lost you are and blank I am. So, to be sure you won’t know them. When I’m liquored or when I’m me. Apathetic, I shall always be. I do not know what else to write. For no more words I see in sight.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/15/2020 10:14:00 AM

Hello Pax Geist, sometimes it is best ot write less words,instead a lot. Fewer words are best sometimes than a lot. Sometimes a blank page makes ou ponder what to write. Have a nice day my friend.

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/16/2019 8:00:00 AM

you pen emotion well...i can feel this one especially in the line, now lost you are and blank i am... it speaks volumes... good write! :) hugs

Pax Geist
Date: 11/18/2019 7:46:00 PM

ahhh, yet from which side are you feeling this inside of you?

Na Na

Date: 11/15/2019 10:03:00 PM

Hi Pax this is good. Thanks for sharing