Word Morph - Coal To Gold

When you first stumbled upon me my soul was dull like coal
You never gave up and kept sight of your majestic goal
Dumb as a lamb yet humble enough to be led by your goad 
Your hard work refined my soul and made it shine like gold
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Strand Avatar
January 25, 2009 at 1:00 AM
Thank Monique for your kind words.Lik ythe imagery in this one especially L4.Rgds Brian
Knowles Avatar
January 24, 2009 at 10:36 PM
wow nice job, this is not a easy type of poem to write, i tried. but u did it realy well, nice job.... Livyyy
Kelly Avatar
January 15, 2009 at 1:45 PM
Monique , well " Morphed " , in a great sequence . This type is not easy , but you've done very well .... Now , if you can make this happen ; WOW !!! ....
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