Word Games

From the twilight of absolution  - he spoke in cliché, the fantasy of living his dream
having seen and done all the things he ever hoped to see and do, in moderation.
Yet, moderation, in and of itself, can be self destructive to the inquisitive self within, 
fortunately, that nagging search of perfection which we all deniably seek, ended  
for him, as the questions affectionately died in the growing of a new relationship.  
 
She answered in riddles, softly smiling, relishing the thought of his consternation
a long distance friendship involving a badminton-like banter of wordmanship
a decade of age separated their experiences, yet, it only enlivened the language,
in all likelihood, they would never meet, surely, he had been part of a past soul group?
Day by day, words pinged and ponged, hopefully, into cyberspace, infinity and beyond!

Poetic Collaberation By Charles Henderson & Debbie Guzzi
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
September 21, 2011 at 10:34 AM
Congratulations on your co-write win in Tracie's "Grab A Mate" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
Horne Avatar
September 16, 2011 at 1:24 PM
Many congrats on all your wins, Debs : )
Lepapa Avatar
September 16, 2011 at 8:51 AM
very special collaboration.Congrats on your win
Sweetheart Avatar
September 15, 2011 at 8:16 PM
Congrats Debbie on your wonderful win with this great collaboration with Charles.. a special blend of two poetic talents luv..
Devonshire Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 2:27 AM
I love what you and Charles have written, Deb. As I said in my comment on his posting: "Moderation" is sometime self destructive to people who are on a quest for perfection. And I love the reference to the "badminton-like banter of wordmanship." You have yourselves a winner here! Best wishes to both of you. Love, Carolyn
Smith Avatar
September 10, 2011 at 9:56 PM
Ah, those words; they can lead one down any number of paths.
Sweetheart Avatar
September 10, 2011 at 7:57 PM
super combination of creative words Debbie.. good luck in the contest.. u have a winning wonder here luv.. hope all is OK in your area.. lots of flooding in Northern Jersey..not here.. great great blog on 9/11..thankxx..
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