Wool

The task is "MAMMOTH" to be sure When the jumping mob get near Whether for tweed coat or rug for floor Then their loud bleating we hear As from them their coats of white we shear.

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Funom Makama

Date: 3/2/2016 8:06:00 AM

What a lovely page with a profound group of words. I am loving every aspect of this piece. Thumbs up friend and a definite 7

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/29/2016 8:25:00 PM

Dan, congrats on your WOOLISH win. XOX -LINDA-

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/24/2016 3:31:00 PM

cute one. I enjoyed the read!!

Paul Callus

Date: 1/24/2016 1:46:00 PM

Enjoyed your 'different' take on this theme, Dan. ~ Congratulations on your win. // paul

Joseph May

Date: 1/21/2016 3:20:00 PM

Congrats on your win Dan...

Dan Cwiak
Date: 1/22/2016 11:05:00 AM

Thank you, Joseph. I appreciate your stopping and comments.

Skat A

Date: 1/21/2016 12:16:00 PM

Dan, Congrats on your Wooly wool win. Love **SKAT **

Dan Cwiak
Date: 1/21/2016 1:52:00 PM

Thank you, SKAT. Without saying so, your comments woold make my win less than warm. lol

James Inman

Date: 1/21/2016 10:33:00 AM

Clever use of words, enjoyed!

Dan Cwiak
Date: 1/21/2016 1:49:00 PM

Thanks, James. Clever is not something I am often accused of being. lol

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 1/21/2016 4:20:00 AM

Congrats on ur winning write Dan! Great work!

Dan Cwiak
Date: 1/21/2016 1:47:00 PM

Thanks, Upma. Your entry was excellent!

C T

Date: 1/20/2016 11:22:00 PM

thank you

Dan Cwiak
Date: 1/21/2016 12:19:00 AM

You're welcome.

CayCay Jennings

Date: 1/18/2016 6:17:00 PM

I enjoyed your entry. I stumbled all over this contest - simply didn't comprehend the directions, but I eventually got there. This is cute and I wish it all the best .. CayCay

Dan Cwiak
Date: 1/18/2016 7:10:00 PM

Thanks, CayCay. I wasn't sure if I would enter, as didn't quite know what to write. However, having been trained as as archeologist, I could not help trying to get a "Wooly Mammoth" into this. I appreciate your comments, as always.

Jill Spagnola

Date: 1/11/2016 9:49:00 AM

Just awesome Dan, I contemplated this contest for a while, but stayed blocked ~ you rocked, jill

Dan Cwiak
Date: 1/11/2016 10:48:00 AM

Thanks, Jill. I don't know if I rocked, but I did Rug... lol I appreciate the read and your comments.