Dan Cwiak Poet Quintain (English)

Wool

The task is "MAMMOTH" to be sure
          When the jumping mob get near
          Whether for tweed coat or rug for floor
          Then their loud bleating we hear
          As from them their coats of white we shear.

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Funom Makama March 2, 2016 at 8:06 AM What a lovely page with a profound group of words. I am loving every aspect of this piece. Thumbs up friend and a definite 7

Poet Destroyer A January 29, 2016 at 8:25 PM Dan, congrats on your WOOLISH win. XOX -LINDA-

Andrea Dietrich January 24, 2016 at 3:31 PM cute one. I enjoyed the read!!

Paul Callus January 24, 2016 at 1:46 PM Enjoyed your 'different' take on this theme, Dan. ~ Congratulations on your win. // paul

Joseph May January 21, 2016 at 3:20 PM Congrats on your win Dan... Dan Cwiak January 22, 2016 at 11:05 AM Thank you, Joseph. I appreciate your stopping and comments.

Skat A January 21, 2016 at 12:16 PM Dan, Congrats on your Wooly wool win. Love **SKAT ** Dan Cwiak January 21, 2016 at 1:52 PM Thank you, SKAT. Without saying so, your comments woold make my win less than warm. lol

James Inman January 21, 2016 at 10:33 AM Clever use of words, enjoyed! Dan Cwiak January 21, 2016 at 1:49 PM Thanks, James. Clever is not something I am often accused of being. lol

Dr. Upma A. Sharma January 21, 2016 at 4:20 AM Congrats on ur winning write Dan! Great work! Dan Cwiak January 21, 2016 at 1:47 PM Thanks, Upma. Your entry was excellent!

C T January 20, 2016 at 11:22 PM thank you Dan Cwiak January 21, 2016 at 12:19 AM You're welcome.

CayCay Godwin January 18, 2016 at 6:17 PM I enjoyed your entry. I stumbled all over this contest - simply didn't comprehend the directions, but I eventually got there. This is cute and I wish it all the best .. CayCay Dan Cwiak January 18, 2016 at 7:10 PM Thanks, CayCay. I wasn't sure if I would enter, as didn't quite know what to write. However, having been trained as as archeologist, I could not help trying to get a "Wooly Mammoth" into this. I appreciate your comments, as always.

Jill Spagnola January 11, 2016 at 9:49 AM Just awesome Dan, I contemplated this contest for a while, but stayed blocked ~ you rocked, jill Dan Cwiak January 11, 2016 at 10:48 AM Thanks, Jill. I don't know if I rocked, but I did Rug... lol I appreciate the read and your comments.