Wooden Moon

The wood moon
and its splinters
caress its beauty
all over all to see
breath taking lovely
close your eyes
take it in while you can
witness the 
wooden moon
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Smith Avatar
February 25, 2010 at 10:41 AM
this is a great poem it was very beautiful and i loved it. Jo
Anish Avatar
November 21, 2009 at 4:14 PM
The moon has water on it! Maybe it will trun out to be made of wood. Hope you are O.K. Matthew Anish
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November 7, 2009 at 10:12 AM
Unusual take on the moon! What did you mean by "wooden moon"? Hope you are well! Peace and Blessings Matthew Anish
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