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ask me a riddle one that's not hard and with it i'd fiddle and tear it apart search for the words in meticulous ways looking for clues to remove me from the maze tell me a story one that's not long and i'd listen with interest and follow along and try to learn your yearnings if your stories have morals would they have happy endings are there parts where the story curls write me a song with words of love sing my name take me above convince the world melt my heart make me believe in your art hypnotize me with harmony and sing to me until sadness leaves paint my portrait nothing fancy mind you features are important so don't spare the youth paint me as you see me I want to know the truth if you paint my picture can you see me loving you show me your expression look at me and smile is your smiling laughter let it linger for a while can your eye's tell me what you feel right now is the feeling sexy or can you show me how am i asking to much for this one time meeting maybe you can come again and we can call this dating

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Date: 3/2/2010 9:18:00 AM
We all question and wonder about our perception on how people look at us or what they think of us. Most of the time we read to much into things . My portrait of John Loving ii is that of wonderful, warm loving man. His last name says it all "loving" not only once but thrice. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 1/30/2010 9:13:00 AM
Don't you just love the people we can become with words!!! Excellent verse, John loving iii. Please join my menage et trois
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Date: 1/7/2010 5:53:00 AM
Let Me paint you John, A friend with a Helping hand and loving smile:)excellent Riddle to Fiddle and im pig in the middle:)to my FAVZ..Charma
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Date: 1/5/2010 6:40:00 PM
Very nice poem...Enjoyed...Marty
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Date: 1/5/2010 1:50:00 PM
That's alot of questions and alot of self analysis and alot of need for love. I hope you get what you need!(Line 6 meticulas/meticulous) Light & Love
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Date: 1/4/2010 6:12:00 PM
Cool poem John. A lot of perspective offered. Thanks for sharing. Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 1/4/2010 5:07:00 PM
yes maybe too much, but I like it!! good job!!
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