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Won't you try harder

so far I'm fairly unimpressed
I keep wanting to give you chances
~ prove your heart is true



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 5:21 PM
relationships are hard...hard to know if someone's love is true.
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 12:29 PM
Hello Lin, yes he should prove his love is true. Hugs. / Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 2:18 PM
Hello Lin, oh, you are welcome. Enjoy your evening . Hugs. Darlene/
Gauthier Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 1:58 PM
Hi Darlene, thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment ~
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