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Won'T You Come On In

Won't you come on in..... won't you make my day... you've got my heart in your hand.. tell me that you're going to stay. I can't help how I feel I want to be your man You've got my heart in your hand So won't you come on in. It's all I can stand I need your love to give me a lift So, won't you come on in won't you make my day. You mean everything to me you're the sunshine in my life. The smell of your hair the touch of your lips send me to paradise, so, won't you come on in won't you make my day. The thought of your leaving the loss of your smile and the touch of your lips is more than I can stand so, won't you come on in won't you make my day. Won't you come on in..... won't you make my day... you've got my heart in your hand.. tell me that you're going to stay.

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Date: 6/26/2011 4:29:00 PM
Sweet and romantic with such poetic flare.
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Date: 6/26/2011 4:29:00 PM
Sweet and romantic with such poetic flare.
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Date: 6/20/2011 9:27:00 AM
wow its really amazing ,, full of passions and many feelings ,, good job :)
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Date: 6/19/2011 6:36:00 PM
lovely write
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Date: 6/19/2011 6:21:00 PM
Passionate feelings of love well expressed, Richard
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