Won'T You Come On In

Won't you come on in.....
won't you make my day...
you've got my heart in your hand..
tell me that you're going to stay.

I can't help how I feel
I want to be your man
You've got my heart in your hand
So won't you come on in.

It's all I can stand
I need your love
to give me a lift
So, won't you come on in
won't you make my day.

You mean everything to me
you're the sunshine in my life.
The smell of your hair
the touch of your lips
send me to paradise,
so, won't you come on in
won't you make my day.

The thought of your leaving
the loss of your smile
and the touch of your lips
is more than I can stand
so, won't you come on in
won't you make my day.

Won't you come on in.....
won't you make my day...
you've got my heart in your hand..
tell me that you're going to stay.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Wesley Avatar
June 26, 2011 at 4:29 PM
Sweet and romantic with such poetic flare.
Wesley Avatar
June 26, 2011 at 4:29 PM
Sweet and romantic with such poetic flare.
Saleh Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 9:27 AM
wow its really amazing ,, full of passions and many feelings ,, good job :)
Roberts Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 6:36 PM
lovely write
Mehta Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 6:21 PM
Passionate feelings of love well expressed, Richard
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