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Won'T Work

Roses are red Violents are blue You are my soul mate And I love you… Roses are wilting The violents are dead This wont work out Just go home instead…

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James Inman

Date: 8/12/2018 9:32:00 AM

Clever

Line Gauthier

Date: 7/24/2018 2:52:00 PM

A fun poem, Haley. If only more relationships were that honest, it may save a lot of complications in the end.

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 7/10/2018 1:21:00 PM

Ahh such a lovely poem it is, to be honest I like the second stanza more than the first one, "this won't work out, go home instead"

Haley Dagley
Date: 7/10/2018 2:01:00 PM

Yes I try to compare the two sides the world is facing. More times than not it is the second one! :(