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Won'T Work

Roses are red 
Violents are blue
You are my soul mate
And I love you…

Roses are wilting
The violents are dead
This wont work out 
Just go home instead…

Copyright © Haley Dagley | Year Posted 2018

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August 12, 2018 at 9:32 AM

Clever

July 24, 2018 at 2:52 PM

A fun poem, Haley. If only more relationships were that honest, it may save a lot of complications in the end.

July 10, 2018 at 1:21 PM

Ahh such a lovely poem it is, to be honest I like the second stanza more than the first one, "this won't work out, go home instead"

July 10, 2018 at 2:01 PM

Yes I try to compare the two sides the world is facing. More times than not it is the second one! :(

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