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Won'T Let Go

You hold her down and you never let her go Wishes for happiness and tranquility Wishes for feelings she will never know But she tries her best to abandon the hostility You patch it up and think it's ok But it boils underneath It will show it self another day Just a knife waiting in its sheath You couldn't do what had to be done you wouldn't take no for an answer Now she's gone, hating your guts And you are left here to suffer All the apologies and all the fights They quickly come and swiftly go Think you have solutions to make it right But you have no clue and you don't really know But one day it will hit you Square in the face That she was the perfect person Stuck in your horrible place.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/27/2009 7:21:00 AM
Ver'Viv' Keep these rhymes on goin
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Date: 5/15/2009 2:16:00 PM
Hello, passionate and full of emotion. I like it. Ernilando
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Date: 5/14/2009 9:15:00 AM
lot of emotion in these lines. it be like that sometimes-love and peace:james
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Date: 5/14/2009 9:13:00 AM
AWWWWW!!! Sweetie...If You EVER Need ANYONE To Talk To You Can Soup Mail Me :) Love You, Lexi! XOXOXOXO
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Date: 5/14/2009 8:37:00 AM
A passionate write filled with sadness. So much hurt drips from each line but it is so well written.
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