Wonders of Space

At night, the sky morphs into
Black velvet: its ebony
Creases glistening with stars.
Darkness engulfs a wobbly
Earth spinning on its axis,
Forever circling the sun: 
Gliding silently through space,
Held in place by gravity.
Imagine: an eternal
Journey into the unknown
Kingdoms of both time and space.
Lights appear in the sky like
Magic, when the sun sets, and
Night is put on full display.
Orbiting the Earth, the moon's
Pull sets tides to ebb and flow.
Quasars spin and pulsars pulse,
Revolving at super speeds;
Sending synchronized flashes
Throughout the fabric of space.
Uranus and Mars sink, as
Venus and Neptune ascend.
While Jupiter basks in the
X-rays streaming from the sun.
Yet, seeing a shooting star
Zip through the sky: tops them all.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Gauthier Avatar
May 14, 2018 at 10:18 PM
A fun poem. Superbly done, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
May 15, 2018 at 8:35 AM
Thanks Line, I truly appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
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October 16, 2017 at 1:38 PM
I enjoyed your fabulous alphabet poem - congrats on your placement, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
October 16, 2017 at 1:53 PM
Thanks Agnes, I'm delighted to hear from you my friend, Emile.
Barden Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 5:27 AM
Very cool Alphabet poem, Emile - I thoroughly enjoy this write - congrats! :-)
Pinet Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 10:06 AM
Thanks Gregory, I appreciate your support my friend. Emile.
Shetley Avatar
October 12, 2017 at 9:53 PM
Wonderful poem, thank you for entering my contest and congrats on your placement!
Pinet Avatar
October 16, 2017 at 1:55 PM
Thanks so much Thvia, I appreciated the chance to participate with so many talented poets, Emile.
A  Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 3:39 PM
Emile, Congratulations on your awesome win. **SKAT**
Pinet Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 7:34 PM
Thanks ever so much SKAT, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Leiser Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 11:34 AM
Very beautifully described, atmospheric poem, Emile! Congrats on your win :)
Pinet Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 2:38 PM
Thanks Laura, I appreciate your support. Emile.
A. Sharma Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 11:21 PM
Congrats on ur awesome winning poem Emile!U tuk us in space n hv a mesmerising feeling of universe!
Pinet Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 9:17 AM
Ah Dr. Sharma, I love hearing from you, you bring a smile to my day. Emile.
Delaney Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 10:26 PM
Congratulations Emile: You made me forget the form with your fascinating story. SuZ
Pinet Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 9:16 AM
Thank Suzanne, your comments have humbled me. Emile.
Guzzi Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 7:58 PM
Great example to use outer space WOW! Congrad's on Your Win. Light & Love
Pinet Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 9:15 AM
Thank you Debbie, your comments are always most welcome. Emile.
Hamilton Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 6:28 PM
love this Emile a space dance congrats on placing hugs
Pinet Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 6:31 PM
Thank you Shadow, your comments are most welcomed and appreciated, Emile.
Kendrick Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 5:37 PM
This ABC poem is awesome !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara
Pinet Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 6:11 PM
Thank you so much Sara, for this vote of confidence and encouragement. Emile.
Y. Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 5:28 PM
Hi Emile,l just stopped by to say congratulations on your 2nd place win:-) Alexis
Pinet Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 6:12 PM
Thanks Alexis, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Allison Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 5:16 PM
such wonderful imagery Emile many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Pinet Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 6:12 PM
Thanks Jan, as always, I appreciate your support. Emile.
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July 23, 2015 at 12:34 AM
Oh Emile, I love your entry. I enjoy space and learning about the universe. There is so much we can now enjoy with technology improving so fast. Pluto, pluto with high mountains and a moon...who knew! Your entry should do great in the contest Emile. Hugs, Connie 7 P.S. the picture is awesome!
Pinet Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 9:14 AM
Thanks so much Connie, I appreciate your warm words of support and your friendly canter. Emile.
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July 6, 2015 at 1:03 PM
Very well thought out and put together, Emile - Excellent! All the very best! :) john.
Pinet Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 1:06 PM
Thanks John, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Dome Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 12:07 PM
Such an outstanding write Emile, I just love the visuals and wonderful wording. You describe the wonders of the universe so well. A fav for me and a 7, I'd give you more if I could. well done. best wishes. Pete.
Pinet Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 12:56 PM
Thanks ever so much Peter, your comments and friendly visits are always welcome. Emile.
Smith Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 11:37 AM
This is fabulous Emile...the flow is great ..no hesitation like most in this form...a "7"
Pinet Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 12:55 PM
Thanks Tim, as always I appreciate your visit. Emile.
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July 6, 2015 at 10:07 AM
Emile, this a free ride on the space!!! Wow!!! awesome imagery and lines!~Olive Eloisa =)
Pinet Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 11:35 AM
Thanks Olive, I appreciate your comments and friendly visits. Emile.
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