Wonders of Space

At night, the sky morphs into
Black velvet with ebony
Creases that glisten with stars. 
Darkness engulfs a wobbly  
Earth spinning on its axis,
Forever circling the sun;
Gliding silently through space,
Held in place by gravity.
Imagine an eternal
Journey into the unknown
Kingdoms of both time and space. 
Lights appear in the sky like
Magic, when the sun sets and
Night gets put on full display.
Orbiting the Earth, the moon’s				
Pull sets tides to ebb and flow.
Quasars spin and pulsars pulse,
Revolving at super speeds,
Sending out rhythmic flashes 
Throughout the fabric of space.
Uranus and Mars sink, as
Venus and Neptune ascend
While Jupiter basks in the
X-rays streaming from the sun. 
Yet, seeing a shooting star 
Zip through the sky; tops them all.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 5/14/2018 10:18:00 PM
A fun poem. Superbly done, Emile.
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Date: 5/15/2018 8:35:00 AM
Thanks Line, I truly appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/16/2017 1:38:00 PM
I enjoyed your fabulous alphabet poem - congrats on your placement, Emile.
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Date: 10/16/2017 1:53:00 PM
Thanks Agnes, I'm delighted to hear from you my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/13/2017 5:27:00 AM
Very cool Alphabet poem, Emile - I thoroughly enjoy this write - congrats! :-)
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Date: 10/13/2017 10:06:00 AM
Thanks Gregory, I appreciate your support my friend. Emile.
Date: 10/12/2017 9:53:00 PM
Wonderful poem, thank you for entering my contest and congrats on your placement!
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Date: 10/16/2017 1:55:00 PM
Thanks so much Thvia, I appreciated the chance to participate with so many talented poets, Emile.
Date: 7/24/2015 3:39:00 PM
Emile, Congratulations on your awesome win. **SKAT**
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Date: 7/24/2015 7:34:00 PM
Thanks ever so much SKAT, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 7/24/2015 11:34:00 AM
Very beautifully described, atmospheric poem, Emile! Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 7/24/2015 2:38:00 PM
Thanks Laura, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 7/23/2015 11:21:00 PM
Congrats on ur awesome winning poem Emile!U tuk us in space n hv a mesmerising feeling of universe!
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Date: 7/24/2015 9:17:00 AM
Ah Dr. Sharma, I love hearing from you, you bring a smile to my day. Emile.
Date: 7/23/2015 10:26:00 PM
Congratulations Emile: You made me forget the form with your fascinating story. SuZ
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Date: 7/24/2015 9:16:00 AM
Thank Suzanne, your comments have humbled me. Emile.
Date: 7/23/2015 7:58:00 PM
Great example to use outer space WOW! Congrad's on Your Win. Light & Love
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Date: 7/24/2015 9:15:00 AM
Thank you Debbie, your comments are always most welcome. Emile.
Date: 7/23/2015 6:28:00 PM
love this Emile a space dance congrats on placing hugs
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Date: 7/23/2015 6:31:00 PM
Thank you Shadow, your comments are most welcomed and appreciated, Emile.
Date: 7/23/2015 5:37:00 PM
This ABC poem is awesome !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara
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Date: 7/23/2015 6:11:00 PM
Thank you so much Sara, for this vote of confidence and encouragement. Emile.
Date: 7/23/2015 5:28:00 PM
Hi Emile,l just stopped by to say congratulations on your 2nd place win:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/23/2015 6:12:00 PM
Thanks Alexis, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 7/23/2015 5:16:00 PM
such wonderful imagery Emile many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/23/2015 6:12:00 PM
Thanks Jan, as always, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 7/23/2015 12:34:00 AM
Oh Emile, I love your entry. I enjoy space and learning about the universe. There is so much we can now enjoy with technology improving so fast. Pluto, pluto with high mountains and a moon...who knew! Your entry should do great in the contest Emile. Hugs, Connie 7 P.S. the picture is awesome!
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Date: 7/23/2015 9:14:00 AM
Thanks so much Connie, I appreciate your warm words of support and your friendly canter. Emile.
Date: 7/6/2015 1:03:00 PM
Very well thought out and put together, Emile - Excellent! All the very best! :) john.
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Date: 7/6/2015 1:06:00 PM
Thanks John, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 7/6/2015 12:07:00 PM
Such an outstanding write Emile, I just love the visuals and wonderful wording. You describe the wonders of the universe so well. A fav for me and a 7, I'd give you more if I could. well done. best wishes. Pete.
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Date: 7/6/2015 12:56:00 PM
Thanks ever so much Peter, your comments and friendly visits are always welcome. Emile.
Date: 7/6/2015 11:37:00 AM
This is fabulous Emile...the flow is great ..no hesitation like most in this form...a "7"
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Date: 7/6/2015 12:55:00 PM
Thanks Tim, as always I appreciate your visit. Emile.
Date: 7/6/2015 10:07:00 AM
Emile, this a free ride on the space!!! Wow!!! awesome imagery and lines!~Olive Eloisa =)
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Date: 7/6/2015 11:35:00 AM
Thanks Olive, I appreciate your comments and friendly visits. Emile.
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