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Wonders of Humanity

Interesting This life is to me There are things here I shall never wish to see Intriguing These people are They accomplish so much Though we live on a blighted star Unbelievable I don't understand How all this can happen In such as this desolate land Inspiring Words can be so They take me so far Where only angels can go Miraculous That we should exist While all the other planets Couldn't support such as this Amazing We humans are We exist as a miracle In a world that stretches far

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Jasmin Meany

Date: 6/3/2017 5:41:00 PM

Beautiful poem and form :)

Mwalimu Lakhpin

Date: 6/3/2017 12:26:00 PM

I really love your poem @Michelle! Keep it up! You have such a wonderful writing style and an inspiring theme of course!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/3/2017 7:45:00 AM

Juli-Michelle, I love the form, the top of each "cloud," and your wonderful words. I suppose God wanted us to wonder why we are out here alone. Such a miracle.

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 6/3/2017 7:21:00 AM

The way you've set this looks intriguing, it invites us to these well written words. I particularly like the 5th stanza, oh how we have succeeded on this world. Nice poem.

Jared Pickett

Date: 3/19/2014 9:28:00 PM

As I read in order I am watching you mature and grow as a Souper! I can dig it, rather enjoying this ride. I too have a shape poem, one of my Random Thoughts page 2.. Check it out when you get the chance..Asavvy1

M.I.A .

Date: 12/5/2011 7:51:00 PM

beautiful well-thought poem!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/5/2011 3:28:00 PM

This is an amazing piece...Michael

Prince Ekpemandu

Date: 11/30/2011 12:57:00 PM

lovely piece