Wonders

rageing  black fields  of gloom  ,  blowing  dust  from  the  ground, so  silent we  cant hear  a sound  , yet  i can feel my heart  pound  , i am alive  and  feel a thirst  ,  take the  hunger from  my being  ,  its  all dark  i am  seeing  .  i want the  sun  to  escalate ,take  the  rain and  drench  the  sky so i can see  before  i cry.
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Brown Avatar
May 9, 2012 at 1:38 PM
I am trying to catch up some on my thank you's to all the wonderful poets who have left kind comments on my writings. I thank you so much for your words of kindness Rochelle. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope you are having a wonderful day. Love, Carol
Smith Avatar
May 3, 2012 at 1:28 PM
ty everyone
Rhinem Avatar
May 3, 2012 at 1:16 PM
Smile ˜ When I Look At Your Enchanting Eyes, All I Can Find, Is Beauty * I Kiss Your Tears ˜ My Love; John!:) ˜
Smith Avatar
May 3, 2012 at 1:29 PM
ty so much
Andresen Avatar
May 3, 2012 at 12:31 PM
Beautiful written Rochelle, smile in sunshine!! - oxox love Anne-Lise
Smith Avatar
May 3, 2012 at 1:29 PM
ty so much
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