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rageing black fields of gloom , blowing dust from the ground, so silent we cant hear a sound , yet i can feel my heart pound , i am alive and feel a thirst , take the hunger from my being , its all dark i am seeing . i want the sun to escalate ,take the rain and drench the sky so i can see before i cry.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/9/2012 1:38:00 PM
I am trying to catch up some on my thank you's to all the wonderful poets who have left kind comments on my writings. I thank you so much for your words of kindness Rochelle. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope you are having a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/3/2012 1:28:00 PM
ty everyone
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Date: 5/3/2012 1:16:00 PM
Smile ˜ When I Look At Your Enchanting Eyes, All I Can Find, Is Beauty * I Kiss Your Tears ˜ My Love; John!:) ˜
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Rochelle Smith
Date: 5/3/2012 1:29:00 PM
ty so much
Date: 5/3/2012 12:31:00 PM
Beautiful written Rochelle, smile in sunshine!! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Rochelle Smith
Date: 5/3/2012 1:29:00 PM
ty so much

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