Wonderland In Whiteness

"Wonderland in Whiteness" Whiteness is the fairest color of flawless perfection a vibrant tapestry of Creation's affection a masterpiece of beauty; pure as a sinless soul a delicate crafting, so intimate, a treasure of wondrous whole. bright magical color of purity and grace an infinite vision swirling in chantilly lace fluffy couds floating in marshmallow montage' with a canvas of stars twinkling in a heavenly collage'. slow gentle spiral of snowflakes escaping from skies while white essence of dove feeding lost lovers cries as those White Cliffs of Dover reflect cresting waves and mountain peaks slumber, caressing Sun, craves. the brilliant Hope Diamond sparkles white glimmer the Camelot Era revels in White Knight shimmer as street lanterns illuminate glow, effervescent, young hearts inhale breathless love, luminescent. Whiteness welcomes the depth and the breath of soft fabric as positive vibes infiltrate as sheer magic while Planets of Earth weave a web of delight all humanity extols the Heavenly White Knight the Light of the World whose persona shines white. *For Anthony Slauson's Whiteness Contest. *Oct. 3, 2012
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A  Avatar
March 13, 2014 at 2:55 AM
beauty in every line...SKAT
Brown Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 1:28 PM
Congratulations on your win in Anthony's "Whiteness" contest Linda. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
December 1, 2012 at 8:36 PM
WON 5TH PLACE ... THANKXXX
Richards Avatar
December 1, 2012 at 5:55 PM
This is a beauty, makes one wish for a soft and lovely chill of snow, and paints the glittering scene just in time for Christmas!
Harper Avatar
December 1, 2012 at 3:36 PM
Linda, this is an inspired poem, It makes a beautiful statement and is fantastical in imagery! Congratulations on your win!
Ober Avatar
November 30, 2012 at 1:12 PM
Gorgeous write! Congratulations on a great win :)
A   Avatar
November 30, 2012 at 11:56 AM
Linda my bff, congratulations with your awesome win,, always~pd
Maverick Avatar
October 10, 2012 at 1:59 PM
Such a lot of good content here Linda-Marie.." I anticipate you getting a well earned spot with This beauty..!
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October 8, 2012 at 5:57 AM
Lovely Piece JG... you are on a roll with some amazing poetry... so proud... My last poem is still there, I just recieved a comment on it from Wilma.. check again when you have a chance.."My Dripping Pen".... love always Michael Giants CRUZZZZZZZZZZZ....
Hu Avatar
October 4, 2012 at 10:07 PM
So beautifully pure write:)
Onclaud Avatar
October 4, 2012 at 2:17 PM
so rich in imagery with lines of wonderful poetry to read and fill me with light and awe, sweets!.. great expressionism!.. a winner!..:) huggs
Grisetti Avatar
October 4, 2012 at 12:35 PM
Wonderland of whiteness, well woven, Linda.
Roberts Avatar
October 4, 2012 at 11:52 AM
lovely entry for the contest Linda Marie, it should place well
Babcock Avatar
October 4, 2012 at 10:24 AM
An awesome write Linda Marie as beautiful as always. love phyl
Komala Avatar
October 4, 2012 at 9:49 AM
This is so true Linda, white is the masterpiece of beauty..thank you for your beautiful share..congratulation for the contest..Bravo!!! <3<3<3 :) SK
A   Avatar
October 4, 2012 at 9:27 AM
Linda, my bff...i love the way you pulled of this contest...i have no idea what this contest is about... good luck in the contest..pd
Kendrick Avatar
October 4, 2012 at 9:11 AM
A work that points to the coming King..The White Knight that we have all be longing to return..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..My work wasn't for Nette's contest just inspired to write it..I think that I am going through a dry spell..It happens sometimes..Sara
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October 4, 2012 at 8:35 AM
I think you about covered it all my friend! All the white things in one accord here! I wonder if you left anything for me to write about...ha ha, you've done masterfully with this incredible poem! I am quite impressed with this wondrous write, you have brought delight to me just by me reading this poem! I really enjoyed your grandiose piece that I've read this morning, Great Work!!
Sweetheart Avatar
October 4, 2012 at 8:15 AM
white is the perfect color as it represents so many lovely things so enjoy poets .. the finished product now ..luv
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October 4, 2012 at 8:12 AM
Absolutely love this poem!...it reads soooo smooth.
Poet Avatar
October 4, 2012 at 8:09 AM
Wow..Such a beautiful poem on whiteness Linda!Love this very much.
Poet Avatar
October 4, 2012 at 8:07 AM
Yes,first here!!
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