Wonderland

You and I in a wondrous place,
We’ll hide and love in this romantic place.
We hear silence in a fairy like lawn,
Our noisy steps are trembling in a grassy mud zone.

We promise eternity in a secret garden.
You hold my hands and assured me no burden. 
We promise to be forever with two eyes closed.
Sweet good kisses were our magical utmost.

We found a mystic place for us!
Hunters won’t even dare to look for us!
We ran out from home and found ourselves together,
In a greatest wonderland that will last forever.

We pretended flying on air in a gentle good night.
Our love is all well prepared for a magical flight.
I love you and we’ll make a bunch of our own love stories,
I see ourselves grow old telling these countless stories.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Y. Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 11:44 PM
Lei, l just stopped by to say congratulations on your win:-)Alexis
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August 25, 2015 at 6:04 PM
Enjoyed, congratulations
A. Sharma Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 3:24 AM
Wonderful write Lei! Congrats on big win!
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August 24, 2015 at 11:01 PM
Hi Lei. Congratulations on your sweet Romantic WIN... SKAT
Allison Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 5:31 PM
dropping back with my congrats Lei:-) Hugs Jan xx
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March 9, 2015 at 4:18 PM
Lei, Congratulations, on your win. Stop by my latest blog "BEGINNINGS" if you'd like. Hope you are having a Wonderful Day, thank you for supporting my contest -Always & Forever- LINDA
Allison Avatar
December 31, 2014 at 7:40 PM
you transported me to a magical mystical world - lovely descriptive write:-) Hugs Jan xx
Horn Avatar
December 31, 2014 at 5:12 AM
Sends tingles up my spine. A conclusion to a successful love affair. Awesome.
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