Wondering/Doubting

I wonder all the time
If we were meant to be
The world is so crazy 
and my eyes are so hazy
I can  not see

Nor do I want to look upon that face 
And feel the feelings I cant erase 
 
I want you but I don’t 
I feel the passion burning on my skin
Yet at the same time 
I’m a icicle within 

All the voices in my mind
Swirl and twirl
And combined 

Some say to stay with you
The man I always knew

Others say to leave 
What you’ve done is to harsh for me

I fancy you 
And cannot stand your presence 

Is this the love I dreamed of
Or just a sad rollercoaster filled with shattered dreams

And  whose destroying them 
Is it you?
Or is it me?

So I’ll stay and wonder 
And I’ll doubt 
Is this what true love is about
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mehta Avatar
May 5, 2010 at 6:32 PM
Good
Nutter Avatar
May 5, 2010 at 5:48 PM
Excllent write to love or not to love places the heart in a quandry.
A  Avatar
May 5, 2010 at 5:39 PM
IT COULD POSSIBLY BE, ENJOYED THE WRITE
Green Avatar
May 5, 2010 at 5:33 PM
nice...
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