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Wondering and Hurting

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I've been thinking so much about you babe I don't know where to start My minds been working overtime Its breaking up my heart So I'm making up excuses now of how I'm gonna play but no matter how, its hurting now I know its gonna stay Chorus: Well I cant say I love you It's a different kind of love So If you help me to decide I know what I'm dreaming of Oh yes its just the beginning and I'll want you till the end If not to be my own true love I'll take you as my friend My minds working overtime like a time-bomb in a shell I don't know which way to turn I'm going through such hell Oh yes its just the beginning and I'll want you till the end If not to be my own true love I'll take you as my friend Chorus: Well I cant say I love you It's a different kind of love So If you help me to decide I know what I'm dreaming of Oh yes it's just the beginning and I'll want you till the end If not to be my own true love I'll take you as my friend So please help me to decide These feelings that I try to hide Tell me what your feeling too Don't leave me wondering, If your hurting too (Repeat)

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Date: 1/3/2017 5:09:00 AM
I have read all your poems Janet and just listened them on you tube and really enjoyed reading and listening, I like them all though this is the one I like the best.
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Janet Keegan James
Date: 1/3/2017 2:15:00 PM
Thank you Roy, I enjoyed writing each one of them. They hold such a sentimental meaning to me, my wish was that others would find they can relate to my words. The drinking song I wrote with my dad for a bit of fun, he composed all the music. Thank you for your kind words, and I look forward to reading yours too.

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