Wondering and Hurting

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I've been thinking so much about you babe
I don't know where to start
My minds been working overtime
Its breaking up my heart 
So I'm making up excuses now
of how I'm gonna play
but no matter how, its hurting now
I know its gonna stay

Chorus:
Well I cant say I love you
It's a different kind of love
So If you help me to decide
I know what I'm dreaming of
Oh yes its just the beginning
and I'll want you till the end
If not to be my own true love
I'll take you as my friend

My minds working overtime
like a time-bomb in a shell
I don't know which way to turn
I'm going through such hell
Oh yes its just the beginning
and I'll want you till the end
If not to be my own true love
I'll take you as my friend

Chorus:
Well I cant say I love you
It's a different kind of love
So If you help me to decide
I know what I'm dreaming of
Oh yes it's just the beginning
and I'll want you till the end
If not to be my own true love
I'll take you as my friend

So please help me to decide
These feelings that I try to hide
Tell me what your feeling too
Don't leave me wondering, If your hurting too (Repeat)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 1/3/2017 5:09:00 AM
I have read all your poems Janet and just listened them on you tube and really enjoyed reading and listening, I like them all though this is the one I like the best.
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Janet Keegan James
Date: 1/3/2017 2:15:00 PM
Thank you Roy, I enjoyed writing each one of them. They hold such a sentimental meaning to me, my wish was that others would find they can relate to my words. The drinking song I wrote with my dad for a bit of fun, he composed all the music. Thank you for your kind words, and I look forward to reading yours too.
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