Wondering About Astral Beings

I am just a part of this earthly star wandering beneath its mystic alchemy… but there are billions, billions of twinklers knighting cosmic galaxies aside from Milky Way: And curiosity lingers within...are we human souls the only residents in this multiverse? Or do other astral beings criss-cross amidst this vast territory gracing all worlds then to dwell on our tiny sphere pulsing through air and clay’s fire? How my naiveté will always probe a mystery far beyond the grasp of quantum theories where I have journeyed into nights seeking unknown horizons this mind cannot accurately fathom. Every blazed nebula I outline seem to affirm the presence of outer life-forms, guarding maybe invading our pathways… still, my essence belongs to earth- star, my folk-mother, overseeing this finite voyage through an appointed odyssey , not among space-like orders like myself in a way...but with a king of all gods. Contest of Anthony Slausen, Ancient Aliens 1/29/2018

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Date: 3/3/2018 4:58:00 PM
Beautifully stated, Nette. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/31/2018 8:06:00 AM
Myself I can’t believe this small planet is the only one that contains life. I like your poem Nette.Hugs Rick.
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Date: 1/29/2018 9:52:00 AM
I like you take on the contest, maybe they walk amongst us already...
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Date: 1/29/2018 2:44:00 AM
- A thoughtful poem Nette, wonderfully written - Good luck in the contest - Best wishes for a lovely new week :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/28/2018 10:18:00 PM
Fabulous , Nette, Hugs
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Date: 1/28/2018 5:34:00 PM
Amazing poem Nette. Interesting. Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 1/28/2018 5:13:00 PM
I like it...and suspect so it might be...Nice poem Nette...All the best my friend
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Date: 1/28/2018 3:22:00 PM
Steven Spielberg would love this; his themes are about beings from different dimensions aligning with us in this wide expanse. Outstanding poem that transcends conventional beliefs!
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Date: 1/28/2018 2:59:00 PM
Wonder not my friend if we are alone or not for God wouldn't have wasted His infinite wisdom for such an insignificant place/! However we, no matter how small we are still we are interconnected with the macrocosm, no matter how vast it is so our spirit encompasses the ALL dearest, nette ! Superb deep writing! How lovely to receive your visit!
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