Wondering

I always wonder why 
Birds stay
In the same place
When they can fly
Anywhere on the earth 
Then I ask myself 
The same questions
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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March 3, 2016 at 1:45 PM
Samuel,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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March 3, 2016 at 8:52 AM
Agreeing with Cynthia, this piece takes the mind in so many directions, and I love that!
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March 3, 2016 at 8:26 AM
A very probing poem, introspective and deep in meaning. I like the brevity and the end lines, superb.
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