Wonderful Worthing Promenade Part 1

Five miles of neatly spaced suckered palm planted 
Bustling promenade,
Not withstanding a provincial cafe-culture 
Of restaurants and exciting little bars,
Enhance upon regal elegance of the crammed hotels
Regency period style facades;
Their fashionable shadows slowly lifting and slowly falling
Across the lines of deferentially, slowly moving cars.

Trundling on down Marina Parade,
Some, perhaps, making their way onto Brighton road:
Day trippers and boisterous holiday makers for Lancing,
Shoreham and the other side of Hove.
Happy lovers, sedentary couples, retired gentlemen casually dressed
In their slacks and checked tweeds,
Kids with plastic spades and empty buckets;
Strolling parents pulling back hard on taut leads -
wrestling with overly excited, barking hounds of all types and all breeds.

Boastful flat Georgian roofs and ionic columns of dazzling lilacs,
Primrose and purest whites...
Oh what marvelously pleasing lines of sublime English Riviera -
Greek revival delight.
Pediments, decorative cornice, dormiers, bracketed balconies...
And dare i say: just a touch of Queen Anne?
Town of exquisite par excellence - so perfectly genteel -
So spick and so span!

Long gone: The Dragoons, the smugglers, the looters, the wreckers
And hoarders;
Now out in the Channel: Bathers, windsurfers, and sailors
Brave the crested waves of warming blue waters.
Long gone: The boatbuilders, the fishing smacks, the old salts 
Who wound upon these rusting Capstans that hauled the steel hawsers;
Trapped within shimmering mirages, just hazy distortions
That confuse and bewilder: The spotter, the tourist, the after-lunch walkers.

Elegant Pavilion Theatre, crowned with Mansard liken lead dome roofs,
Aesthetically combine
As grandest frontage to your magnificent Victorian pier
Of eighteen sixty one: Stream-Line - Art Deco design.
Wailing gulls, screaming at crashing rollers, tumble over and over
Beneath cloudless days,
Aligning on smooth painted rails held proudly aloft -
Iron legs running defiantly out into Britannias ruling waves.

Frothing Spumes teasing with Golden curls frolic atop 
Of the grey speckled foams,
That stooping, scoop up and scatter upon a pebbled beach:
With ancient Coombe rock, polished flints and rattling multicoloured stones.
Slatted timber Groynes and revetments sympathize 
Amidst the wretched sands forlorn, despairing groans;
Longshore drifts incessant lap, lap, lap, lullaby drowning out
An objectionable, long-suffering coastlines mournful, ill-fated undertones.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Bangalee Avatar
March 25, 2019 at 3:36 AM
great poetic expression
Godwin Avatar
November 25, 2016 at 10:45 AM
Dear John Thank you very much for your poem, I really enjoyed it, I am currently putting a book together called we love Brighton & Hove. our book Features local poets from the Sussex area, I was wondering if you would allow us to include your work. Also, if you have any other similar works we would be really interested. Any profits from the book will be donated to a local charity. Please contact me at [email protected] Kind Regards Terry Terry Godwin The Laughing Poet
Fleming Avatar
December 10, 2016 at 4:09 PM
Terry, firstly, allow me to apologize for the delay in answering your very kind and generous remarks; I work for the Royal Mail, and, as you can imagine, it is nothing short of organised chaos at this very moment! Of course I would be delighted and honoured if you should want to include my poem in any publication you see fit. May I suggest you take at look at another couple of my poems: "The new Bypass", and..."Grand residential old Worthing town". So very nice to become acquainted, Terry! All my very best...And my warmest regards! :) john
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 18, 2015 at 4:38 AM
Your way with words enchants the soul. This piece is so impressive I can't wait to read the second part John. Outstanding!
Fleming Avatar
April 18, 2015 at 5:33 PM
Hi, Connie. Hope you are well...its good to see you visiting again! Thank you ever so much for your lovely comments! Best regards!! :) john.
Thirtyseven Avatar
April 4, 2015 at 6:45 AM
The images you've captured here, the way you introduced history, what a masterful write. I'll have to go and finish it... Oh and Happy Easter.
Fleming Avatar
April 4, 2015 at 3:12 PM
Many thanks, Scott! Allow me to wish you a very happy Easter as well!! Best regards!! :) john.
Yvonne Avatar
April 1, 2015 at 4:07 PM
You are a stupendous writer John! I love your work, brilliant!
Fleming Avatar
April 1, 2015 at 8:12 PM
Good to see you back amongst friends, Armand. You are always very welcome here. My very best regards!! :-) john.
Callus Avatar
April 1, 2015 at 2:57 PM
What can I say, John! This is beautiful; the imagery captivating; your keen eye hovering from one lovely view to another. You paint a giant picture that appeals to the senses; offering the present while taking a look at the past. Hope that this Sussex town will not fall prey to extreme commercial demands! #7 // paul
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April 1, 2015 at 8:19 PM
Thank you, Paul! I am always pleased to see you paying me a visit; I appreciate your kind and generous comments! My very best regards!! :-) john.
Pinet Avatar
March 31, 2015 at 10:14 AM
Wonderful imagery and depth to this piece. Your thoughts come alive and breathe within your words. An absolute delight to read with a mystical flowing cadence that welcomes the experience, and ends with a smile. I am captured by the images so skillfully developed by the author. Emile
Fleming Avatar
April 1, 2015 at 5:47 AM
Your kind comments are much appreciated, Emile! Many thanks - Best regards!! :) john.
Dietrich Avatar
March 29, 2015 at 10:02 AM
I so agree with Kim's comment below mine. I could not have said it better. You are the soup travelogue writer!!
Fleming Avatar
March 29, 2015 at 10:16 AM
Thank you, Andrea. I accept this honorary title you have both bestowed upon me with great pride and affection! My best regards!! :) john.
Nunez Avatar
March 27, 2015 at 11:22 AM
You have signed yourself into being the travelogue writer for your land, dear John. A reader feels he/she is right there, looking at the same pictures you have described. Such vivid imagery. A 7. Keep writing! Kim :)
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March 28, 2015 at 6:50 AM
Hello, Kim. Its good to see you visiting again once more - I hope you are keeping well! Many thanks for your kind comments. Best regards!! :) john.
Ward Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 12:27 PM
Description has found its soulmate in you, John! Julia, xx
Fleming Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 12:40 PM
Why thank you, Julia! That is very sweet of you. best regards! :) john.
Allison Avatar
March 25, 2015 at 4:27 PM
wow if this is part one I cant wait for part 2 - amazing imagery I can picture this so vividly in my head - a 7 from me:-) Hugs jan xx
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March 26, 2015 at 2:14 AM
Jan, thanks for the visit and kind remarks - i am most grateful! My best regards!! :) john.
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