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Wonderful Words

Words,words,flowing through my mind, I'm chilling,having a wonderful time, Words,words,forming into lines,twisting,turning,tying up my mind, Flowing with a beat,generating crazy rhymes... Words,words,they are pulling my strings, A puppet to these words,ohh what a beautiful thing, Controlling my fingers,my thoughts,my mood, Have me sitting on the toilet,writing in the nude... Words,words,treating me like a punching bag, Words of a dying old man or a playful little lad, Love I have felt or an experience gone bad, Whenever I am sad a few punches makes me glad... Words,words,sending chills through my skin, Explosion in my head,from deep,deep within, Words,wonderful words,keep calling,keep calling, Lost in these words,i'm falling,i'm falling....

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/20/2014 10:13:00 AM

hehe,, :) right back at you

Richard Palmer
Date: 1/21/2022 8:33:00 AM

lol, have a great ay

Charles Reese

Date: 7/30/2014 8:25:00 AM

A nice write my friend. Yes inspiration comes to us in many places not just in front of the computer.

Richard Palmer
Date: 8/6/2014 12:08:00 PM

lol,thank you Charles

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/25/2014 6:31:00 PM

you are welcome

Richard Palmer
Date: 8/6/2014 12:09:00 PM

you too

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/18/2014 3:21:00 PM

once again, thank you for the reply..PD

Richard Palmer
Date: 7/25/2014 2:30:00 PM

thanks PD,,oxox

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 7/11/2014 1:19:00 AM

What excellent flow. A pleasure to read. Enjoy the creative moment, may it last long time.

Richard Palmer
Date: 7/25/2014 2:30:00 PM

thanks Scott,may it last a lifetime

Kelly Deschler

Date: 7/7/2014 9:47:00 PM

It is so easy to become lost in the poetry, sometimes. Especially, when the inspiration never lets us go!.... I love the rhythm and rhyme in this poem. Great work, Richard!

Richard Palmer
Date: 7/8/2014 8:00:00 AM

it is Kelly,lol,thanks for your wonderful comment

Cherl Dunn

Date: 7/7/2014 8:13:00 PM

Nice work here young man, I could have gone without the potty part lol but I could clearly understand what you were trying to say. I think you have a lot of raw natural talent, watch for your spelling and spacing though just saying. But over all it's a nice work. cheri

Richard Palmer
Date: 7/8/2014 7:59:00 AM

thanks much Cherl,gonna keep my eyes open

Carol Eastman

Date: 7/6/2014 1:24:00 PM

Loved this one... LOL

Richard Palmer
Date: 7/7/2014 6:09:00 AM

thanks Carol,more to come

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/6/2014 7:37:00 AM

Its all about words,more powerful than a sword..Great message in your poetic WORDS

Richard Palmer
Date: 7/7/2014 6:08:00 AM

thanks much Charmaine

Connie Moore

Date: 7/4/2014 9:32:00 PM

Richard these "words" are exquisite and have captured the total essence of how poetry comes to fruition. thank you for the intuition. Connie And thank you for reading mine!!

Richard Palmer
Date: 7/5/2014 8:36:00 AM

you are welcome Connie,honored by your comment,thank you oxox

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/4/2014 3:12:00 PM

Don't you think that's why the first line of the bible is "in the beginning there was the word and the word was God" Light & Love

Richard Palmer
Date: 7/4/2014 4:03:00 PM

hmmm now that's something to think about,thank you Debbie

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 7/2/2014 5:00:00 PM

superb Richard ty for visiting my page hugs

Richard Palmer
Date: 7/4/2014 4:00:00 PM

thank you for visiting mine Shadow

Malkavian Raven

Date: 7/2/2014 12:25:00 PM

Words create thought. Thought creates imagery. Imagery creates emotion. Emotion creates desire. Desire creates action. Actions creates inspiration. Inspiration creates further words. And the cycle repeats. - Words, even on their own, hold so much power - and as we near Independence Day in the U.S., I am reminded why the founding fathers put "Freedom of Speech" as the FIRST Amendment. - Yes Richard, words, words, words... Absolutely loved this. Beautifully penned. - Malkavian

Richard Palmer
Date: 7/4/2014 4:01:00 PM

thank you very much Malkavian

Richard Palmer
Date: 7/4/2014 3:59:00 PM

thank you very much Malkavian

Suzanne C. Goudreau

Date: 6/30/2014 7:53:00 PM

A very captivating and moving read! I could feel your emotions pour down this page as I read this. A powerful and meaningful read. Thank you for sharing!

Richard Palmer
Date: 7/4/2014 3:58:00 PM

you are welcome,thank you Suzanne

Jan Allison

Date: 6/30/2014 10:39:00 AM

love the rhyme, the repetition, the alliteration in fact I just love the poem! Hugs Jan xxx

Richard Palmer
Date: 7/1/2014 12:24:00 PM

thank you very much Jan,oxox

Vera Duggan

Date: 6/30/2014 2:23:00 AM

I really do like that poem Richard beautiful Rhyming, don't worry I remember your name Take care..............Vera................

Richard Palmer
Date: 7/1/2014 12:22:00 PM

same to you girl,have a great day

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/28/2014 8:06:00 AM

Xool, poem by all means... Linda

Richard Palmer
Date: 6/29/2014 2:53:00 PM

thanks much Linda,oxox

Fa Solo

Date: 6/27/2014 6:58:00 PM

good poem imma about to fall in a bag of money whew!!

Richard Palmer
Date: 6/29/2014 2:50:00 PM

remember me,lol,thanks

Vera Duggan

Date: 6/27/2014 2:02:00 AM

Richard loved that poem, such wonderful rhyming, my type of poem. Take care.......Vera............

Richard Palmer
Date: 6/29/2014 2:43:00 PM

thank you very much Vera,come back for more anytime

Betty Bateson

Date: 6/26/2014 12:40:00 PM

Playing with words. Always fun. Great write.

Richard Palmer
Date: 6/26/2014 5:44:00 PM

yep,they always are,thanks Betty

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/26/2014 8:08:00 AM

This feels like a song Rich, with the right amount of humor to entertain.

Richard Palmer
Date: 6/26/2014 5:44:00 PM

thanks Richard,theses words,these words,lol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/25/2014 12:44:00 PM

sometimes, words words words make or break us... you surely live in their life-beats, richard.. amazing!.. huggs

Richard Palmer
Date: 6/26/2014 6:41:00 AM

writing always comforts me,thanks Nette,oxox

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/25/2014 12:08:00 PM

- I'll catch you ..... - Pleased to read, Richard .... as always !!! - Have a nice day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Palmer
Date: 6/26/2014 6:40:00 AM

thank you much Anne,catch me now,lol,oxox

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 6/25/2014 11:44:00 AM

Where are you falling to? The abyss? Haha. Words can twist and it can turn. It can move and it can coo. It will do anything you want it to. It can shout and it can howl. It can pout and it can wow. It will bless and it will mess. Haha. I know what route I am going, lol

Richard Palmer
Date: 6/26/2014 6:38:00 AM

thanks Toquyen,love your lines,anywhere you are going take me lol,oxox