Richard Palmer Poet Rhyme

Wonderful Words

Words,words,flowing through my mind,
I'm chilling,having a wonderful time,
Words,words,forming into lines,twisting,turning,tying up my mind,
Flowing with a beat,generating crazy rhymes...

Words,words,they are pulling my strings,
A puppet to these words,ohh what a beautiful thing,
Controlling my fingers,my thoughts,my mood,
Have me sitting on the toilet,writing in the nude...

Words,words,treating me like a punching bag,
Words of a dying old man or a playful little lad,
Love I have felt or an experience gone bad,
Whenever I am sad a few punches makes me glad...

Words,words,sending chills through my skin,
Explosion in my head,from deep,deep within,
Words,wonderful words,keep calling,keep calling,
Lost in these words,i'm falling,i'm falling....

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Poet Destroyer A August 20, 2014 at 10:13 AM hehe,, :) right back at you Richard Palmer January 21, 2022 at 8:33 AM lol, have a great ay

Charles Reese July 30, 2014 at 8:25 AM A nice write my friend. Yes inspiration comes to us in many places not just in front of the computer. Richard Palmer August 6, 2014 at 12:08 PM lol,thank you Charles

Poet Destroyer A July 25, 2014 at 6:31 PM you are welcome Richard Palmer August 6, 2014 at 12:09 PM you too

Poet Destroyer A July 18, 2014 at 3:21 PM once again, thank you for the reply..PD Richard Palmer July 25, 2014 at 2:30 PM thanks PD,,oxox

Scott Thirtyseven July 11, 2014 at 1:19 AM What excellent flow. A pleasure to read. Enjoy the creative moment, may it last long time. Richard Palmer July 25, 2014 at 2:30 PM thanks Scott,may it last a lifetime

Kelly Deschler July 7, 2014 at 9:47 PM It is so easy to become lost in the poetry, sometimes. Especially, when the inspiration never lets us go!.... I love the rhythm and rhyme in this poem. Great work, Richard! Richard Palmer July 8, 2014 at 8:00 AM it is Kelly,lol,thanks for your wonderful comment

Cherl Dunn July 7, 2014 at 8:13 PM Nice work here young man, I could have gone without the potty part lol but I could clearly understand what you were trying to say. I think you have a lot of raw natural talent, watch for your spelling and spacing though just saying. But over all it's a nice work. cheri Richard Palmer July 8, 2014 at 7:59 AM thanks much Cherl,gonna keep my eyes open

Carol Eastman July 6, 2014 at 1:24 PM Loved this one... LOL Richard Palmer July 7, 2014 at 6:09 AM thanks Carol,more to come

Charmaine Chircop July 6, 2014 at 7:37 AM Its all about words,more powerful than a sword..Great message in your poetic WORDS Richard Palmer July 7, 2014 at 6:08 AM thanks much Charmaine

Connie Moore July 4, 2014 at 9:32 PM Richard these "words" are exquisite and have captured the total essence of how poetry comes to fruition. thank you for the intuition. Connie And thank you for reading mine!! Richard Palmer July 5, 2014 at 8:36 AM you are welcome Connie,honored by your comment,thank you oxox

Debbie Guzzi July 4, 2014 at 3:12 PM Don't you think that's why the first line of the bible is "in the beginning there was the word and the word was God" Light & Love Richard Palmer July 4, 2014 at 4:03 PM hmmm now that's something to think about,thank you Debbie

Shadow Hamilton July 2, 2014 at 5:00 PM superb Richard ty for visiting my page hugs Richard Palmer July 4, 2014 at 4:00 PM thank you for visiting mine Shadow

Malkavian Raven July 2, 2014 at 12:25 PM Words create thought. Thought creates imagery. Imagery creates emotion. Emotion creates desire. Desire creates action. Actions creates inspiration. Inspiration creates further words. And the cycle repeats. - Words, even on their own, hold so much power - and as we near Independence Day in the U.S., I am reminded why the founding fathers put "Freedom of Speech" as the FIRST Amendment. - Yes Richard, words, words, words... Absolutely loved this. Beautifully penned. - Malkavian Richard Palmer July 4, 2014 at 4:01 PM thank you very much Malkavian Richard Palmer July 4, 2014 at 3:59 PM thank you very much Malkavian

Suzanne C. Goudreau June 30, 2014 at 7:53 PM A very captivating and moving read! I could feel your emotions pour down this page as I read this. A powerful and meaningful read. Thank you for sharing! Richard Palmer July 4, 2014 at 3:58 PM you are welcome,thank you Suzanne

Jan Allison June 30, 2014 at 10:39 AM love the rhyme, the repetition, the alliteration in fact I just love the poem! Hugs Jan xxx Richard Palmer July 1, 2014 at 12:24 PM thank you very much Jan,oxox

Vera Duggan June 30, 2014 at 2:23 AM I really do like that poem Richard beautiful Rhyming, don't worry I remember your name Take care..............Vera................ Richard Palmer July 1, 2014 at 12:22 PM same to you girl,have a great day

Poet Destroyer A June 28, 2014 at 8:06 AM Xool, poem by all means... Linda Richard Palmer June 29, 2014 at 2:53 PM thanks much Linda,oxox

Fa Solo June 27, 2014 at 6:58 PM good poem imma about to fall in a bag of money whew!! Richard Palmer June 29, 2014 at 2:50 PM remember me,lol,thanks

Vera Duggan June 27, 2014 at 2:02 AM Richard loved that poem, such wonderful rhyming, my type of poem. Take care.......Vera............ Richard Palmer June 29, 2014 at 2:43 PM thank you very much Vera,come back for more anytime

Betty Bateson June 26, 2014 at 12:40 PM Playing with words. Always fun. Great write. Richard Palmer June 26, 2014 at 5:44 PM yep,they always are,thanks Betty

Richard Lamoureux June 26, 2014 at 8:08 AM This feels like a song Rich, with the right amount of humor to entertain. Richard Palmer June 26, 2014 at 5:44 PM thanks Richard,theses words,these words,lol

Nette Onclaud June 25, 2014 at 12:44 PM sometimes, words words words make or break us... you surely live in their life-beats, richard.. amazing!.. huggs Richard Palmer June 26, 2014 at 6:41 AM writing always comforts me,thanks Nette,oxox

Anne-Lise Andresen June 25, 2014 at 12:08 PM - I'll catch you ..... - Pleased to read, Richard .... as always !!! - Have a nice day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Richard Palmer June 26, 2014 at 6:40 AM thank you much Anne,catch me now,lol,oxox

Toquyen Harrell June 25, 2014 at 11:44 AM Where are you falling to? The abyss? Haha. Words can twist and it can turn. It can move and it can coo. It will do anything you want it to. It can shout and it can howl. It can pout and it can wow. It will bless and it will mess. Haha. I know what route I am going, lol Richard Palmer June 26, 2014 at 6:38 AM thanks Toquyen,love your lines,anywhere you are going take me lol,oxox