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Wonderful Tonight

It’s late in the evening; Calvin’s got new clothes to wear He’s very excited as we comb his soft black hair He looks at me, his eyes big and bright And seems to say, “Daddy, I feel wonderful tonight.” He goes to his mother, with a wriggle and a smile She puts him on her shoulder that they can dance for a while He lies there happy, contented alright And his soft little coos say, “Hmmm, I feel wonderful tonight.” He’s placed in his rocker, as he nods off to sleep And murmurs with contentment, in tranquility deep I look at him and say, “I hope you are all right ‘Cause your Mommy and I, we changed your nappy by Candlelight.”
(An interesting set of circumstances prompted this poem. Load shedding had left us in the dark and my laptop was playing Eric Clapton's "Wonderful Tonight." Written about five months ago, it gives my now-eight-month-old something to look back on when he can read.)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/2/2009 2:14:00 AM
Extraordinary! Fine double rhyming and a delightful message... unique and enchanting! Best wishes, Keith
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Chimwemwe Chiluba
Date: 9/28/2011 8:14:00 AM
nice work...................

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