Wonderful Man

Depressed I was
in the depths of despair.
I nearly gave up,
then you were there.
Wonderful man
you came to my rescue.
I stopped being sad
and started anew.
The happiest I've been 
in a very long time.
Thrilled in just knowing
that you were mine.
Now I hear bells,
what can it mean?
Time to wake up
you're only a dream.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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May 29, 2014 at 4:53 PM
JENNY, CONGRATULATIONS, enjoying your winning poem in Isaiah's DREAM paint contest.... hugs...Linda
Allison Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 3:21 PM
Sometimes dreams are far better than reality Jenny - this is beautiful a well deserved winner my friend hugs Jan xxx
Devonshire Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 2:54 PM
Hi Jenny, Aww, I was hoping those were wedding bells. What a shame all her happiness was tied only to a dream. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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March 28, 2014 at 12:17 PM
Love this one, just remember patience my dear is a virtue and before you know it your dream love will come true.
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August 3, 2013 at 8:35 PM
Nice Jenny, I like this poem and I'd offer the lady (You) in your poem some sound advice...do what the person in my poem "Are You A Dream?" vowed to do and you'll live with him happily ever after -promise. MC
A  Avatar
August 1, 2013 at 11:17 PM
A nice win.. Jenny, ... LOVE ~SKAT~
A   Avatar
July 30, 2013 at 8:36 AM
Jenny, , congratulations... with your sweet win... luv.. Linda
A  Avatar
July 25, 2013 at 1:27 PM
Hi Jenny, sadly it was only a dream, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless..... Hugs* SKAT
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July 25, 2013 at 4:51 AM
Good morning Jenny, wow... I'm happy you got pulled out of that Sucker punched depression. I've seen what it does to peeps. Please know your poem made me happy. .. I to found myself a wonderful man. And hear the bells, only in dreams. .. I think your dreams are telling you that you're finally happy. Have yourself and nice and wonderful day. Always and forever Linda
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July 25, 2013 at 4:21 AM
- Hello new member: Jenny. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here with us. - I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you luck. - (Give and receive comments) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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