Robbie Hall Poet Rhyme

Wonderful Man

I fancy you will find a wonderful man 
Who loves you the way I once did 
And will hold your admiration in hand 
To give back to you what I once undid. 

A man who understands who you are 
One who is present in your times of need.  
A man who loves you both near and far 
To support you when you fail or succeed. 

Perfect in every way, handsome, graceful 
Adhere always to your whimsical whims.  
Never wavering, unkind, or wasteful  
Keeping you warm at night with sturdy limbs. 

Greets you every morning with fanfare
Adheres to all the desires you may crave
And meets your unrealistic standards  
Pining to please you from cradle to grave. 

In your troubled world there is only one
Who is tough enough to withstand such fun.

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Alison A Smith nee Howarth September 15, 2026 at 3:37 AM A sharp, ruefully ironic sonnet-like breakup poem, its disciplined rhyme and steady quatrains beautifully serving the escalating portrait of impossible expectations. The final couplet lands with particular force—both affectionate and exhausted—turning “such fun” into a wonderfully barbed conclusion.