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Wonderful

I see the curves in the murky dawn
In the straight lines, lined up like pawns
I see the morning
In drunken sunshine

The life is so wonderful
Young and full of love
WONDERFULL
When you gaze at lovers pissing on waterfalls

I am neither impolite nor rude
Excuse the poetic ruse
If only.... if only
The clocks traveled backwards

If only you could know me
Yesterday
Once more I beg of you
Shout how wonderful I used to be

Aurore you were so wonderful
Me I was so pathetic
I sing to the morning commuters in the rain
About the sickness of lovers and cheaters pain

Wonderful
So wonderful to be here
If only the metro runs me over
The pathetic, I would be gone

Wouldn’t that be so wonderful?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/16/2016 10:35:00 AM
Salute to your pen and a well done to the mind out of which this sea of wisdom emanated. A definite 7
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Date: 5/2/2016 6:01:00 PM
Tomorrow you'll be just as wonderful ,as yesterday indeed...Lovely poem Arthur.
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Date: 5/1/2016 8:26:00 AM
I'll be sure not to find myself under waterfall when you are in the area! Great poem as always Arthur.
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Date: 4/30/2016 1:14:00 PM
A fantastic write Arthur. You really know how to draw us in and feel what you feel.
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Date: 4/30/2016 7:16:00 AM
Wonderfully wonderful, Arthur! Great introduction. How often we feel like saying: "If only you could know me Yesterday"!! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 4/30/2016 7:12:00 AM
Formidable. I understand and feel. hugs x
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Date: 4/30/2016 1:40:00 AM
you definitely glow with this wonderful artpiece, arthur..huggs
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/30/2016 1:59:00 AM
Thank you, can you guess the inspiration?
Date: 4/30/2016 12:01:00 AM
Arthur, Ur wonderful is really very wonderful. Glad to read this one..........hugs
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/30/2016 12:03:00 AM
Thank you so much, based on a singer

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