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Wonder Women

W-W. Training bra, stuffing tissue ambition. Black Bikini top, captures a man’s vision. Breast-feeding, a painful loving tradition. Mammogram exam, life becomes a mission. Breast Cancer Results, nothing close to removing the foreskin in a circumcision. 11-12-12 SandyIvy

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/11/2013 2:30:00 AM

excellent, stopping by a second and third time.......saying hi,,,,........where IZ U???? .... xoxoxoxoxoox ;-)

Robin Davis

Date: 9/26/2013 11:07:00 PM

This is a creative and unique piece. Truthful and honest. nice job

Good Night

Date: 6/6/2013 5:24:00 PM

well ain't this clever nice poem

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/7/2012 6:49:00 AM

A Super Congratulations on your placement in P.D....'s "Femme fatale" contest Sandy Ivy. Love Carol

Len Gasun

Date: 12/4/2012 8:44:00 PM

Hello my dearest friend and Libramate! How are you? I'am reading this wonderful winning piece of yours once again and extend once more my hearty congratulations! Well, i hope you're doing well. Thank you so much for my super win in your contest. I'm sorry if the expression comes only now because yesterday, I got a flu next to my friends here. It's too humid in the country where I'm. My million thanks my dear Sandy. I'm greatly honored. Have a wonderful and grace-filled day always! love always,LG

Tahera Mannan

Date: 12/4/2012 1:59:00 AM

Many many congrats for this deep write and win.

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 12/3/2012 8:42:00 PM

Oh, soo true, what a wonderful way to convey the message of breast cancer prevention!

Skat A

Date: 12/3/2012 5:44:00 PM

congrats~SKAT

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/3/2012 3:48:00 AM

Congrats on your winning place Sandy love xx

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/2/2012 5:49:00 PM

Congrad's on your winning write. Light & Love

Len Gasun

Date: 12/2/2012 9:58:00 AM

My hearty congratulations on your great win my dearest Libramate, Sandy! love/hugs always, Leonora

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 12/2/2012 9:21:00 AM

Well done Sandy! The way you've shown the progression in age mirrors the development of cancer - it creeps up. Congrats on your win!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/2/2012 7:35:00 AM

Owwww! Congrats on win

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/2/2012 4:14:00 AM

Sandy. :-) Congratulations with your heartfelt poem.. always~ PD

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/24/2012 3:51:00 PM

yikes, yikes and yikes...maybe if they were grown men when they did it? then it might compare a tiny bit? Amazing what we woman go though as if it's nothing and for what exactly aye? Light & Love

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 11/17/2012 8:56:00 AM

Nice write. Interesting rhyme, cycle of the breast, how true. Thank you for sharing Sandy. Sending smiles, Connie

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/17/2012 8:02:00 AM

ouch, this is so good SandyIvy, really is....

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/13/2012 11:15:00 PM

You went thru the whole cycle there, SandyIvy! I enjoyed this entry into PD's contest. I also loved reading all the sexy haiku winners. thanks!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/13/2012 5:42:00 PM

WOW SANDYIVY A MOST POWERFUL WRITE AND SEQUENCE OF EVENTS FOR ALL WOMEN WHO R WONDERS .. WINNING WISHES FOR CONTEST .. THANKXX FOR MY BIG WIN TOO ..SO ENJOYED WRITING A SEXY HAIKU FOR U LUV..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/13/2012 12:33:00 PM

thank you Sandy....for the support and the win... hugs to you.. xox~ xox~ xox~...love~ pd

Rollo West

Date: 11/13/2012 12:14:00 PM

Hi Sandy This is really great. Love the comparison at the end. Thank you for running the contest and considering my Haiku, and really thank you for the 1st place, wow, and I am a new guy here. Really a great site with people to match. Rollo