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Wonder From Golden Skies

Fibonacci Poetry Contest
Sponsor:  Ink Empress

Sky
shines
golden
to bronze trees
in waves on the hills
across the snow covered carpet
There is a soft, amber, reflection for many miles
Wonder fell from the clouds and froze beneath my feet, I can't help but to think you feel it

1/17/24

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Ink Empress

Date: 1/27/2024 10:37:00 AM

Beautiful and descriptive word weaving throughout this dear hilda; very well delivered: congratulations on your win: thank you for sharing

Mike Gentile

Date: 1/18/2024 12:45:00 PM

Heidi, this is just wonderful! I am not familiar with the form but you have made it beautifully accessible to the reader! Beautiful!

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/18/2024 1:24:00 PM

Thank you so much Mike. It is nice to see your positive comment. Happy Thursday ! :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/18/2024 7:04:00 AM

Beautiful imagery, my friend. I like how you weaved your words into this form-- like a nature painting, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/18/2024 7:27:00 AM

Thank you Vijay. It was interesting and the sky with trees looked beautiful lastnight. I hope you have a nice day :)

Hiya Sharma

Date: 1/17/2024 5:38:00 PM

Gosh, how magical this Fibonacci is! So intricately you've woven a beautiful imagery, depicting delicate thoughts just so effortlessly.. "Sky shines golden to bronze trees in waves on the hills" Such a gorgeous opening.. In fact, every word here is enchanting.. Especially that ending line.. "Wonder fell from the clouds and froze beneath my feet, I can't help but to think you feel it" Ahh, impeccable! Loved reading this best wishes for the contest :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/18/2024 5:20:00 AM

I really appreciate your thoughtful, kind feedback on this. Thank you very much :)