Wonder and Astonishment

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Looking at objects in astonishment Knowing they are but manifestation We flow through life, in childlike wonderment Bliss ensconced, our heart purrs in contentment Knowing what eyes see as but illusion Looking at objects in astonishment One with That oneness, in the bliss current Knowing God within, in meditation We flow through life, in childlike wonderment In pulse of descent, assured is ascent Knowing that fleeting is our delusion Looking at objects in astonishment Bliss throbs within us, without abatement Knowing that there is no separation We flow through life, in childlike wonderment According right of way to love current Knowing our essence is bliss elation Looking at objects in astonishment We flow through life, in childlike wonderment 22-May-2021

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Sally Eslinger

Date: 5/22/2021 1:47:00 PM

Fabulous composing! Richard, I think youi’re ready to take on Mozart now:) You know I’d give a lot to be able to spend 2 straight days sharing God’s mystical gifts stories with you. “I will never be the same again...Shout to the Lord!”

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 5/23/2021 2:43:00 AM

Thanks for your kind words, Sally! Happy you enjoyed! Why do you call me Richard? :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/22/2021 11:53:00 AM

I found this poem entertaining; as I read through this villanelle poem, I realized many nuances to be found within it, beautiful poetry. Have a nice weekend

L Milton Hankins

Date: 5/22/2021 9:10:00 AM

Beautiful, well-structured villanelle, Unseeking Seeker.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 5/22/2021 9:32:00 AM

Your favourite form!