Wonder

Wonder- ment for your ear- full of songs of my heart- felt pleasure in finding you're in to stay. Wonder- full is the moon- light so bright tonight for- getting all the pain contained in my heart. Wonder- lust for a life- time that changed for a soul- full of pursuit for something worth- while here. Created by CarolineCecile copyright © 06.29.11 Was having fun tonight creating this series of cinquain that can be read in 2 different ways. Can you see that? Thanks for reading, Caroline.

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Anthony O. Mitchell Jr.

Date: 7/3/2011 1:44:00 PM

Love just how it reads so well in a couple of different ways. A job well-done too by a wonderful POETYESS.

Anthony O. Mitchell Jr.
Date: 7/3/2011 1:46:00 PM

Excuse me, "POETESS"... my spelling sometimes not that well.

Judy Ball

Date: 7/2/2011 6:58:00 PM

Yes I can see it. Great job Caroline. God Bless, |JB

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/1/2011 1:42:00 PM

Intresting use of form in this one. Hope this missive finds you well. How are things going with you book project? Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Cory Long

Date: 6/30/2011 2:20:00 PM

this is beautiful I love it. cory

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/30/2011 7:37:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Caroline. I will be back again soon to read more. Hoping you find your soul filled with inspiration today and everyday and may your writing endeavors come to be. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/29/2011 10:41:00 PM

wonderful, caroline... looks like it's also a pensee.. uniquely done; i'm wonder-struck! :) huggs, nette