Wonder

Wonder-
ment for your ear-
full of songs of my heart-
felt pleasure in finding you're in
to stay.

Wonder-
full is the moon-
light so bright tonight for-
getting all the pain contained  in
my heart.

Wonder-
lust for a life-
time that changed for a soul-
full of pursuit for something worth-
while here. 

Created by CarolineCecile
copyright © 06.29.11


Was having fun tonight creating this series of cinquain that can be read in 2 
different ways. Can you see that?
Thanks for reading,
Caroline.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mitchell Jr. Avatar
July 3, 2011 at 1:44 PM
Love just how it reads so well in a couple of different ways. A job well-done too by a wonderful POETYESS.
Mitchell Jr. Avatar
July 3, 2011 at 1:46 PM
Excuse me, "POETESS"... my spelling sometimes not that well.
Ball Avatar
July 2, 2011 at 6:58 PM
Yes I can see it. Great job Caroline. God Bless, |JB
Anish Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 1:42 PM
Intresting use of form in this one. Hope this missive finds you well. How are things going with you book project? Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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June 30, 2011 at 2:20 PM
this is beautiful I love it. cory
Brown Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 7:37 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Caroline. I will be back again soon to read more. Hoping you find your soul filled with inspiration today and everyday and may your writing endeavors come to be. Love, Carol
Onclaud Avatar
June 29, 2011 at 10:41 PM
wonderful, caroline... looks like it's also a pensee.. uniquely done; i'm wonder-struck! :) huggs, nette
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