"wonder"

It makes me wonder what your thinking when  alone at night..
It makes me wonder if your feeling whats in plain  sight..
I ofen wonder when your eyes are closed do you dream of me..
I often wonder when Im hurting are you holding the key...
When my world is crowded and not alone can you see me too..
When your world is empty and your alone can you feel me through..
If I laugh or cry out loud do you know its not a show...
If I scream or cheer  so low do you know its time for me to go....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Grisetti Avatar
October 21, 2012 at 10:01 AM
Congratulations on your heatfelt poem getting featured this week.
King Avatar
October 16, 2012 at 7:36 PM
Very wonderful emotional write. Congrats on your feature. I hope she sees this and tells you yes. :)
Culverhouse Avatar
March 10, 2010 at 3:07 PM
different poem, enjoyed reading today
Kendrick Avatar
March 10, 2010 at 12:41 PM
If she cares she is thinking of you that is for sure..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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