Women's Gifts

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My first attempt at a new form invented by Sir Robert Lindsey. (Lind30) 7779 syllable count.

Such beauty comes- among those Her softness, like that of down Her fragrance, a divine rose Men's heart appeal, a splendid renown

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/12/2022 6:58:00 PM

I read what Robert said and I agree! Wonderful Charles! Blessings xxoo

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/12/2022 9:59:00 AM

Robert inspired you well Charlie, Tom

Charles Messina
Date: 1/12/2022 10:30:00 AM

Thank you, Tom.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/12/2022 9:47:00 AM

Robert is a master of form. Who would not love the woman described?

Charles Messina
Date: 1/12/2022 10:31:00 AM

He sure is... Only a fool would not!

L Milton Hankins

Date: 1/12/2022 8:14:00 AM

Great job, Charlie. I haven't tried it yet, but I'm going to. I'm so glad Robert acknowledged it. I loved it!

Charles Messina
Date: 1/12/2022 10:32:00 AM

Thank you, Milton. Looking forward to reading yours!

Robert Lindley

Date: 1/12/2022 7:41:00 AM

You my friend have nailed it the first poem out that poetic gate. Definitely a very fine fav and one so very lovely. God bless..

Charles Messina
Date: 1/12/2022 10:33:00 AM

Thank you, Robert. You have inspired me greatly. Blessings my friend..

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/12/2022 7:33:00 AM

- Lovely poem, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) - (I have to try this form ... sometime in the future :)

Charles Messina
Date: 1/12/2022 10:34:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-LIse. Love this form! Hugs // Charlie :)