Women In My Family

Women in my family
were immigrants, as history records.
Grandmother Rosamond was born in Italy.
Marceline was French and traveled from Lourdes.

My mother, Jaqueline, was wed at seventeen.
A city girl who became a young farmer's wife.
Many valuable traits from her, I did glean
as she taught me how to be prepared for life.

I would be terribly remiss if I forget to rave
about one more very important family female,
my sister, Claudette, who taught me to be brave.
She said, "Get up and try again each time you fail."


June 16, 2022
Women in my family poetry contest
Sponsored by Sotto Poet
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Alex Avatar
July 12, 2022 at 11:24 PM
Family of mixed rich cultures. A true university. Congratulations!
Poet Avatar
July 12, 2022 at 4:54 PM
Jenna, Congratulations to the outstanding winner of the contest. Your poetry was written with a great deal of talent, and it demonstrates your skills quite clearly.
Horsman Avatar
June 16, 2022 at 10:35 PM
Hi Jenna, i think you have touched on a very precious subject. How diversity of immigration, the differing cultures come together with a common goal, can make such a difference. Now to the poetry, yes i'd have to agree with all of the comments below, and add my own appreciation of its power of love, and superb poetry.
Logan Avatar
June 17, 2022 at 8:13 AM
Hi Harry and thank you so very much for not only reading my tribute, but for also reading all of the comments. That's kind of you.
Wolf Avatar
June 16, 2022 at 8:29 PM
Certainly, ancestors to be proud of, Jenna.
Logan Avatar
June 17, 2022 at 8:13 AM
I am very glad to be among such wonderful women in my family. Thanks, Gershon.
M  Avatar
June 16, 2022 at 5:00 PM
Lovely poem Jenna….Debx
Logan Avatar
June 17, 2022 at 8:11 AM
Thank you, Deb.
Koplin Avatar
June 16, 2022 at 3:23 PM
Nice rhyme and flow. Well done!
Logan Avatar
June 17, 2022 at 8:11 AM
Thank you, Mark.
Bauer Avatar
June 16, 2022 at 1:40 PM
Wonderful! This sounds like a winning poem to me, Jenna! It was nice to learn about some of your relatives in a lovely rhyming way…
Logan Avatar
June 17, 2022 at 8:11 AM
Thank for such nice remarks, Ilene. I was glad to share.
Leffanta Avatar
June 16, 2022 at 11:14 AM
Just watched, "Finding Your Roots" where Latifa remarked about how one person can make a difference that lasts for generations. With French & Italian influence, you certainly inherited a love of Romance! Aloha!
Logan Avatar
June 17, 2022 at 8:10 AM
I think she's correct. lol at your romance comment, Rico. Lots of passion, and a touch of temper, too. Thanks!
Cunningham Avatar
June 16, 2022 at 11:01 AM
A lovely tribute to the women in your family Jenna. Your sister has the right outlook on life pick yourself up and try again, never give up. Best of luck in the contest. Tom
Logan Avatar
June 17, 2022 at 8:09 AM
Thanks a lot, Tom. They make me proud to belong to them.
Hankins Avatar
June 16, 2022 at 9:56 AM
Superb, Jenna. The best one I have read so far. I very much liked the rhymes. A winner, for sure.
Logan Avatar
June 16, 2022 at 10:09 AM
I am gratified by your kind thoughts, Milt. I’m never sure what any contest sponsor will find worthy for a placement.
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