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Women Get Noticed

25 April 2011 It dose not matter if a man is blind He will notice a woman every time The scent of perfume in the air The click of heels the swish of her hair Hormones smoking from every pore Lets him know she is at the door A religious man these things he'll suppress But still turn his head at the sight of a dress Man is the head of his household But it is by woman he is controlled This all has purpose all men drink this chalice It is one of Gods ways to keep us in balance

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Date: 4/27/2011 2:52:00 AM
Excellent write, and they do turn our heads, Might want to change (Bods) To Gods, in the last sentence. Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 7/31/2012 6:49:00 AM
Thank you for your comment and the misspell heads up. sincerly bobb

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