Women

Comes from the womb,to not being cheered.
 That has been the culture,it haven’t changed over the years.
 Child reached the moon ,  but not the mind of our people. 
  It has become a rarity that it has been cheered.

  She becomes a girl, and pity is felt for,
  cursed every moment for being a girl.
  But never been appreciated for pain she takes in her .
  When she run bare-foot to make good for the future 
                                                    
  No books seen in her future, the law has been made 
  to live on bread of others.
  Which she never think as cruel .
  Still we pity them as if she is not a SAPIEN.
  Girl conquered the world,but we see then burden to future.
 
  The authority is changed to rule her .
  But her character remains the same whatsoever.
  Still rock remains her strength, in cruelest of wave she face inside her .
  She raises many of them like hers.
  But never appreciated for being a great women.
  The respect should come from heart .
   For a women who brings, all peace to world forever.

  Some respect is gained,  as she grows older.
  But still work for for family,and share her bread to other .
  By being most generous on earth forever.

 And the time comes,  when she need to be helped by others .
 Put aside as old manor with no future.
 Still try to find happiness ,in cheer of the younger .
 Finally the curtain falls,and the end of great  journey comes to a halt .

DEDICATED TO WOMEN OF INDIA.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 8/16/2011 7:54:00 PM
well-said..fine sentiments, jag
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Date: 8/1/2011 3:41:00 PM
This really had my blood boiling and trust me my opinion is almost same like urs. People here only knows how to suck life out of a woman. Did they care for her freedom? her rights? HEr very right of beign educated in this country.We face the oppositions from our own community. The is a long unending saga here. The reformists are dead now. Thank u so much for posting this poem. Good to know ur thoughts here
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Saurabh Gupta
Date: 8/2/2011 11:48:00 PM
thanks smriti ....for such strong comments for supporting my cause......hope it raises some thoughts in minds of people....
Date: 7/31/2011 11:56:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this one..It is sad that in some cultures that the intellect of the women is not appreciated yet...Sara
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