Women

Wonderful enchanting creatures. Some can set you on fire, or freeze you with a look.

Often their greatest beauty lies deep within.

Ministers of great pleasure, or sometimes agony.

Ever mysterious, difficult to read.

Naughty or nice, never know quite what to expect. Can steal your heart
          and crush it, or turn it into a golden treasure. What would the 
             world be without them, boreing I think most men would agree.






For all of the fabulous ladies at poetrysoup.com, and all over the world. Love you all 
Jack

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 9/15/2011 4:43:00 PM
Great fun piece, Jack - as you say, where would we be without 'em!
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Date: 9/15/2011 4:54:00 PM
Thank you sir Jack for your kind comments, much appreciated....with love.....your mate old Jack
Date: 8/29/2011 11:54:00 PM
oooo ! Jack. i love the comment you left on my poem.... enigma is a good word for the poem... lol.. the truth is.. that was a hard collaboration to figure out. Now, you gave the vision to see why i could not comprehend his part... ha ha ha ha... he went way beyond... thank you.. we WOMEN are difficult... naughty and I'm super nice..... have a nice one,..p.d.
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Date: 8/30/2011 12:20:00 AM
Thank you lovely Lady Linda for your kind comments, much appreciated...with love...old Jack
Date: 8/26/2011 5:10:00 PM
wow! thanks!!!! we think u guys are like gold too!!!
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Date: 8/26/2011 10:40:00 PM
Thank you mate lovely Lady Oluwatomisi, love your name, for the kind comments, much appreciated...with love....old Jack
Date: 7/21/2011 11:00:00 PM
Gotta have them shielas, a prancing all about, spending all ya dollars, in the bedroom knock you out:) the fun part hey, good on ya Jack, Don
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Date: 8/26/2011 10:41:00 PM
Thank you mate for you kind comments, much appreciated...with love...your mate old Jack cobber
Date: 7/18/2011 4:05:00 PM
Very true,Old Jack. So correct on life boring without but,a they say also " can`t live with them ,nor without" I personally don`t fit into neither category. I found my soulmate. Thanks alot for your kind comment on my poem " Mobious syndrome. Positive feeback is always uplifting and inspiring. Bless up Paul.
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Date: 7/16/2011 3:29:00 PM
I think men are actually more difficult to read. Maybe because I grew up with all girls! This is sweet as could be, Jack. Nicely done. (I would call it acrostics poem since you spelled out women!) Luv, Andrea
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Date: 7/15/2011 2:06:00 PM
Yes indeed, where would we be without them? Well said!
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Date: 7/15/2011 12:36:00 PM
well Jack u certainly encompassed much of what women are all about ..both sides of the coin..with this Acrostic piece of poetry luv.. bitter or sweet.. a woman is still a treat .. with luv...
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Date: 7/14/2011 10:13:00 PM
deep observation.... lol ... nice work jack. have a great day.
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Date: 7/14/2011 8:07:00 PM
Are they really worth the trouble, dollars gone, they burst your bubble, nah thats not right :) then comes the night? great verse mate, Don
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Date: 7/14/2011 6:05:00 PM
LOL only 2 more poems and you have a contest entry for me, now add an ABC verse [about how you STOP to look at a beautiful woman?] and then an Alliterative verse about hmmm STOP...[all 3 need the concept of STOP incorporated..please put your talents to work? for me?] Light & Love
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Date: 7/14/2011 6:02:00 PM
you have that right ! we can't live with them but we sure as hell can't live without them.
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