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Women are seldom powerful They have endless courage Can control their rage And still stay wonderful Women can be full of common sense They can control the whole family Encourage their husband sincerely And her children with great conscience Women can be beautiful They may wear rags Move around like stags And always stay colorful Women are seldom talkative They cannot stop bragging Truly and pitifully annoying Others who are secretive Women are sometimes credulous They think that a man is a gem Do not want to see the real “him” A situation becoming ambiguous Women can be awfully evil They can be very envious Cannot stop from being malicious Until they are knocked out with thrill

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Date: 5/12/2011 2:46:00 AM
here u shown us real inner sight of women....really they do not want to see the real 'him' they are happy n satisfied with that only..otherwise hardly any relationships stay for that long.... good one Desiree
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Date: 4/21/2011 10:00:00 PM
Now this poem packs a punch, Desiree. I was cheering womanhood until I read the last verse. So true! But fortunately the good qualities outweigh the bad for most women. Very thought-provoking poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/20/2011 8:41:00 AM
Desiree Great take on women , but we are still wonderful and write poetry too. love it. Anne.
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Date: 4/20/2011 7:15:00 AM
You have covered a big range here on the subject. Well done.
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Date: 4/19/2011 5:36:00 PM
Desiree u certainly have my vote on the extolling in your lines about women.. we rock and have power beyond beyond luv.. making this poem a new favorite of mine ..thankxx for reading my poetry and leaving such a sweet comment luv...
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Date: 4/19/2011 8:25:00 AM
that is a good definition in my opinion of a women.. nicely done.. thank you for your kind remarks as well.. have a wonderful day cory
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