Women

Women are seldom powerful
They have endless courage
Can control their rage
And still stay wonderful

Women can be full of common sense
They can control the whole family
Encourage their husband sincerely
And her children with great conscience

Women can be beautiful
They may wear rags
Move around like stags
And always stay colorful

Women are seldom talkative
They cannot stop bragging
Truly and pitifully annoying
Others who are secretive

Women are sometimes credulous
They think that a man is a gem
Do not want to see the real “him”
A situation becoming ambiguous

Women can be awfully evil
They can be very envious
Cannot stop from being malicious
Until they are knocked out with thrill

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Neha Sharma

Date: 5/12/2011 2:46:00 AM

here u shown us real inner sight of women....really they do not want to see the real 'him'..as they are happy n satisfied with that only..otherwise hardly any relationships stay for that long.... good one Desiree

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/21/2011 10:00:00 PM

Now this poem packs a punch, Desiree. I was cheering womanhood until I read the last verse. So true! But fortunately the good qualities outweigh the bad for most women. Very thought-provoking poem! Love, Carolyn

Anne Rutherford

Date: 4/20/2011 8:41:00 AM

Desiree Great take on women , but we are still wonderful and write poetry too. love it. Anne.

Debra Squyres

Date: 4/20/2011 7:15:00 AM

You have covered a big range here on the subject. Well done.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/19/2011 5:36:00 PM

Desiree u certainly have my vote on the extolling in your lines about women.. we rock and have power beyond beyond luv.. making this poem a new favorite of mine ..thankxx for reading my poetry and leaving such a sweet comment luv...