Dan Kearley Poet Rhyme

Woman of Sorrow-Collab

Drink to her whose sorrow
Has aroused a poet's sigh;
A woman who brought tomorrow
What treasure can never buy.
Her words are penned with sadness
And often an empty tone;
Along with all those feelings
In a sea of tears from feeling alone.

Here's to her whose sorrow
Has made many a poet cry;
Her words are read with tears
That rain like love from the sky.
Now the sea will drink her tears
With those we try to hide;
Here's to her whose sorrow
Flows free from deep down inside.


11-28-11
A beautiful collaboration with my friend Elizabeth Wesley
Who intertwined her thoughts with mine

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Jod!E Quintero January 7, 2012 at 12:33 PM Beautiful...Love the lines "her words are read with tears that rain from the sky." Now the sea will drink her tears with those we try to hide." Well written. Thanks for reading my poetry and leaving comments. Much appreciated. Jodie Q

Sharon Ruebel December 16, 2011 at 12:06 PM Hello Dan, What you have penned here is such a part of who I am at this time in my life. It reads volumes of feelings. Love your words. As Always, Shar Dan Kearley December 16, 2011 at 12:41 PM I am sorry to hear that...If there is anything I can do to change those feelings.Perhaps lending an ear.I am here :o)

Andrea Dietrich December 2, 2011 at 12:11 PM I saw this over at Elizabeth's post. It's awesome! Dan Kearley December 4, 2011 at 7:52 PM Thank you, so much for stopping here to let me know also. :o)

Germaine Elliott December 1, 2011 at 11:02 AM beautifully written. a wonderful collaboration Dan Kearley December 1, 2011 at 11:22 AM Thank you very much :o)

Elizabeth Wesley November 30, 2011 at 7:02 PM You and Lizzie were in the mood for sure. Luv, Lizzy haha Dan Kearley November 30, 2011 at 7:33 PM Indeed we were :o)~ Oh! you caught that hey? Hahaha Oopps!

John Aaron Green November 29, 2011 at 7:17 PM just straight up a masterpiece, my friend,,nothing more to say.... Dan Kearley November 30, 2011 at 11:16 AM Thank you very much...

Poet Destroyer A November 28, 2011 at 7:14 PM another nice and wondeful collaboration... you 2 are awesome,..p.d. Dan Kearley November 29, 2011 at 6:38 PM Thank you.. :o)

Lizzie Treetop November 28, 2011 at 2:11 PM Lovely to work together an excellent collaboration. :) Lizzie Dan Kearley November 29, 2011 at 6:37 PM Oopps! Lizzie :o) Dan Kearley November 28, 2011 at 4:13 PM Thanks Lizzy.. :o)