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Woman

Fragile like dew drop
Though I dream, dare, fight and win
Yes! I am woman.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/17/2016 12:15:00 PM
Hi Divya: A great haiku tribute to women as I have three daughters. Great Write!
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Divya Jaiswal
Date: 10/17/2016 12:26:00 PM
Thanks a lot Ralph for your kind word, I had a look on your poems and they are great.
Date: 9/27/2016 3:36:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Divya. :)
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Divya Jaiswal
Date: 9/27/2016 8:22:00 AM
Thanks for your nice words Moon Flower!
Date: 9/22/2016 5:03:00 AM
Good poem but the declaration of the last line might be stronger as "Yes! I am woman" or maybe not.
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Divya Jaiswal
Date: 9/24/2016 1:45:00 AM
Thanks for feedback Keith! This is my first haiku, just trying to get hang of it. I have edited it to make stronger.