Woman

Fragile like dew drop
Though I dream, dare, fight and win
Yes! I am woman.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Sergi Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 12:15 PM
Hi Divya: A great haiku tribute to women as I have three daughters. Great Write!
Jaiswal Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 12:26 PM
Thanks a lot Ralph for your kind word, I had a look on your poems and they are great.
Flower Avatar
September 27, 2016 at 3:36 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Divya. :)
Jaiswal Avatar
September 27, 2016 at 8:22 AM
Thanks for your nice words Moon Flower!
Logan Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 5:03 AM
Good poem but the declaration of the last line might be stronger as "Yes! I am woman" or maybe not.
Jaiswal Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 1:45 AM
Thanks for feedback Keith! This is my first haiku, just trying to get hang of it. I have edited it to make stronger.
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