Woman

She is made in such a manner That she can carry the weight of the whole world And not break down Yet her emotions are so tender That at the slightest of a bruise Her heart breaks with pain.

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Skat A

Date: 1/3/2016 10:20:00 PM

that is deep

Lydia Jerotich
Date: 1/5/2016 2:27:00 AM

Thanks Skat :) Strength of a woman

Vera Duggan

Date: 11/20/2015 5:39:00 AM

Oh Lydia how true this is, yes I agree we are the strong ones, after 50 years of marriage I can certainly vow for that, this is very well written. Take care..................Vera

Lydia Jerotich
Date: 11/20/2015 7:19:00 AM

And after reading your story, I absolutely agree with you dear Vera! Women are very strong. I am so proud of you for the 50 years hand in hand with your dearest Peter, Congrats! And thanks for commenting so kindly on this piece. Love, Lydia.

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 11/18/2015 1:12:00 PM

Another truth. yes us women are so strong yet also very tender at some things. 7+

Lydia Jerotich
Date: 11/20/2015 4:51:00 AM

Very encouraging to hear your kind comments Njeri. And for the highest rating I am elated! Blessings. Lydia.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 11/18/2015 2:54:00 AM

While we women may be tough as steel on the outside, our hearts may be breaking in the inside! Excellent piece, dear Lydia, that deserves a 7! Warmest regards, Pandita

Lydia Jerotich
Date: 11/20/2015 4:54:00 AM

Much gratitude to you my dear Pandita. Always pleasant to read your encouraging comments and your high score rating for me. Kindest regards friend. Lydia.