Rama Balasubramanian Poet Verse

Woes

Why are you weeping dear?
     When will you understand
          whatever happenings
                we face are gifts of lord?

Woes make us think of God,
      Wish we would reach him. So,
           wipe your tears. God wants you.

09.05.2021
Contest Name : Pleiades W
Sponsor : Kim Merryman
Winner 2nd position

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Paula Goldsmith May 14, 2021 at 12:58 PM Congratulations on your win. You did a wonderful write with your Woes. Have a blessed day/weekend...................

Eve Roper May 13, 2021 at 8:57 PM Great flow in your verse, Rama, congratulations on Kim's Pleiades "W" win. Hugs Eve

Anne-Lise Andresen May 12, 2021 at 1:53 AM - Lovely written, Rama :) - Congratulations on your win :) - // Anne-Lise :) Rama Balasubramanian May 13, 2021 at 3:51 AM Thanks Anne. Take care, God bless!

Andrea Dietrich May 11, 2021 at 2:44 PM This is a great message but I still do not like my woes. They got to GOES!!!! Congrats on your win. Rama Balasubramanian May 11, 2021 at 9:35 PM Thanks, even I don't like them. Take care, God bless!

Kim Merryman May 11, 2021 at 1:43 PM Very creative using a conversation to explain woes, Rama! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M Rama Balasubramanian May 11, 2021 at 9:35 PM Thanks. Take care, God bless!