Woe

Floating. Alone in the darkness.
The water beneath me cold and unforgiving.
My breath calm and steady but my heart races regardless.

I just want to sink
but my body remains.
I close my eyes tightly
feel the cold like a knife
piercing my veins.

How did I get here
in the middle of a war?
One against myself
what was it for?

Hands reaching up
holding me steady
but now the weight of my past
proves a little too heavy.

I take a deep breath then
let it all go.

Finally I'm released.
Finally.
I'm free from this woe.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Agustin Avatar
July 5, 2023 at 8:06 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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