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Andrea Dietrich's My Challenge For October Contest...13 Oct 25

Wobbly Knees

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Curse of life, my gangling knees always creak.
Everyone giggles whenever I  stroll .
My kin labels   me...a wobbly antique! 

To prove 'em wrong, I  twirl a rock and roll.
 Sciatica!  Joints lock while floor tiles squeak.

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Terry Miller November 3, 2025 at 7:59 AM Very cute, congratulations

Andrea Dietrich November 3, 2025 at 1:04 AM Very cute one, Nette. You are lucky if this is all you have to deal with. Congrats on a top win

Dr. Vandana Sharma October 16, 2025 at 9:09 PM Knee- pain , oh it is so painful and we should be careful with it.

Kevin Leake October 14, 2025 at 4:37 AM This got me Laughing A great write Best wishes Kevin

Paige Hind October 13, 2025 at 8:57 PM Cool write, glad to see you have a good attitude, lol again, very cool, Nette ,3

sara Etgen-Baker October 13, 2025 at 5:49 PM appreciate the humor...well done for the contest.