Gregory Richard Barden Poet Rhyme

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With'Ring Wish

When I was young my heart bloomed like a flower

          Love's guileless petals spread to climb life's bower

               Oh, if withered vines could still but climb, I'd then

     Bring forth one more blossom to remember ... when.






~ 1st Place ~  in the "When And Then" Poetry Contest, Jenish Somadas, Judge & Sponsor.

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Andrea Dietrich January 23, 2020 at 8:01 PM LOVE this, Greg!! Congrats, Buddy Gregory Richard Barden January 25, 2020 at 2:02 PM Thank you very much, Buddy! :o) <3

Anne-Lise Andresen January 23, 2020 at 1:46 PM - My words get tiny, ... wonderfully written ... and, in just 4 lines ... - Congratulations, Gregory :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Gregory Richard Barden January 25, 2020 at 2:02 PM Very kind of you, Anne-Lise - thank you so much! :o) <3

Jenish Somadas January 23, 2020 at 6:24 AM Delightful to read this blossomed beauty… Withered vines when touched by the magic love of nature will blossom for sure.. Congrats on your great win and I’m honoured to have your poem in this contest.. Gregory Richard Barden January 25, 2020 at 2:01 PM Oh thank you so very much, Jenish, I am so pleased that you found this one worthy of praise and such kind placement! This was a joyous project - Blessings to you, my friend! :o)