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Without You There's No Me

Your essence was conceived from my rib, a clavicle that would entwine us forever. As Adam to Eve, from the beginning & to the ending of our time. You are the "W" to my world, where your entity is my true existence. Like freash air to my nose & my body to clothes, you complete me. You are the fruit to my tree, without you it's so difficult to breath. So, please...empathize wiith me, because Without you there's no me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/9/2008 10:19:00 AM
You successfully place such strong emotion in this write making yourself clear with a good use of imagery. Very well written. Michael
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