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Without You

Without you Without you, I'm here nor there I’m now finding it hard to thrive I never knew! Love can be rare I no longer know how to survive Without you, always being about Their seems to be no explanation Now what do I do, I'm left in doubt It’s like I have no more destination Without you, I just feel so unhappy And I’ve never felt this misplaced I can’t get through, if not with me I feel I’m now lost without a trace Without you, I want to run and hide Because my hearts skipping a beat And too I'm losing all sense of pride As I am now feeling so obsolete This of course is how I feel when I’m not with you Lost you make my world shine you light up my life babe In all so many ways I love you dawn now and always Babe love David xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Part TWO TO WITH YOU................................. WRITTEN BY DAVID SCOTT JULY 2014

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Date: 6/10/2022 3:53:00 PM
wonderfully crafted
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David Scott
Date: 7/25/2022 7:59:00 AM
Thanks for comments not been on soup for while been reworking few writes this year's old bits became parts of other poems such as poem you,gone,repeat and so fourth in an ABA sheame l agree at time writing this was just playing around with words
Date: 6/10/2022 3:38:00 PM
Without ignoring "the poetic licence,"second stanza needs to be revised.
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