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Without You

Without you

Without you, I'm here nor there  
I’m now finding it hard to thrive
I never knew! Love can be rare
I no longer know how to survive
                           
Without you, always being about
Their seems to be no explanation
Now what do I do, I'm left in doubt
It’s like I have no more destination

Without you, I just feel so unhappy 
And I’ve never felt this misplaced
I can’t get through, if not with me
I feel I’m now lost without a trace

Without you, I want to run and hide
Because my hearts skipping a beat
And too I'm losing all sense of pride
As I am now feeling so obsolete










This of course is how I feel when I’m not with you
Lost you make my world shine you light up my life babe 

In all so many ways I love you dawn now and always
 
Babe love David xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Part TWO TO WITH YOU.................................

WRITTEN BY DAVID SCOTT JULY 2014

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Tafadzwa Chamisa

Date: 6/10/2022 3:53:00 PM

wonderfully crafted

David Scott
Date: 7/25/2022 7:59:00 AM

Thanks for comments not been on soup for while been reworking few writes this year's old bits became parts of other poems such as poem you,gone,repeat and so fourth in an ABA sheame l agree at time writing this was just playing around with words

Tafadzwa Chamisa

Date: 6/10/2022 3:38:00 PM

Without ignoring "the poetic licence,"second stanza needs to be revised.